Welp here it is! Something had to be done! And I'm the big enough bone-head to concock such a horrible story. So this Story is made just because I love the two series, and it just the right enough time to destroy both of their repution. Sorry the first chapter stays on Zim alot I just wanted get everything set for the Ponies for when they came in and to introduce Zim to the people who have never heard of him (if they haven't heard of them, why read this?)*shrugs*
So with that said Enjoy the Crossover!
Chapters (5)
You have no idea how long I had this idea. I was actually going to write character into my own fanfic
You better not disappoint me!
Ouch... I just got bitch slapped by a wall of text. I like where this is going but it's quite harsh on the eyes.
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My Little Invader
(MLP:FiM and Invader Zim Crossover)
Chapter 1: In the Beginning
In the land of Equestria peace is everywhere and the land lays still with quietness. But today, this isn't the case, because quietly up in the stars, Equestria has been selected to be part of the plan 'Operation Impending Doom 2'!
"Is this the planet?" Says a tall Purple armored alien to his Red counter-part "Yes, this is planet!", says the Tallest Red ,"This is the planet we're going to give to...you know who" he says raising an eyebrow with a harsh tone in his voice. The invader in question is none other than Invader Zim! Zim had completely destroyed Operation Impending Doom 1 and was later sent to Earth as a false mission. For the the past number of years, Zim has been chasing his Arch-rival Dib for domiantion of the planet. But now the Almighty Tallest have finally come up with a plan that can actually use Zim's disaster-pron nature for good use. ''So what happens now?", says Tallest Purple "We contact Zim and tell him we've got a new mission for him".
Meanwhile on the planet Earth, Zim has been chased into his base by Dib. "FLITHY, EARTH, STINK MEAT! YOU WILL NOT ENTER THE FORTRESS OF ZIM!" Zim shouts locking the door behind him.
"You'll never win Zim!", said Dib, "I will beat you! I will save Earth! AND I WILL SHOW EVERYONE THAT YOU ARE AN ALIEN!" Dib soon walks away to point at Zim's Base like an Angry Monkey.
"Computer! Has the Earth boy left yet?" Zim said to his CPU.
"Yes Zim" the Computer responds. At that very second the computer receives a message, "ZIM! A message from the Tallest!". Zim eagerly jumps for joy and squeaks happily and turns on a transmitter to talk to his glorious leaders.
"Yes, my Tallest, you request my presence?", Zim says with a child-like tone in his voice.
"Yes we do Zim", says Red ,"You are requested to come aboard the Massive for a new objective!" Zim was a little bit stunned to hear this! Ever since landing on Earth, his prime objective was not only take over Earth, but to destroy Dib.
"But my Tallest!..I have not finished business with the Earth Monkies! I STILL HAVE MUCH TO DO!" Zim was about to give many other reasons why not to leave Earth but the Tallest were already in the radius of the Earth, so they teleported Zim and his assitant Gir aboard the Massive.
"Ah! There you are!" said Tallest Purple, "We started to think you didn't want this mission!".
"But I don't!", said Zim, "I still have much to do! My battle with the hippo-headed boy has not yet finished!" The Tallest look at each other and look back to Zim who is almost at the verge of tears.
"Stop whining Zim!" Red Snapped, "We have a much better mission for you to accomplish!" Red continued, "We've found a planet that's just right for Impending Doom 2". Zim looked puzzled and a bit interseted.
"Really?" Zim perked up a bit. Purple took over the talk, "Yes, we found the ideal planet, not even a stup......ENDOUS invader such as yourself would have a problem with it". Purple quickly corrected himself.
"So what's the name of the doomed planet?", Zim asked.
"The planet is known as......Equestria." Red replied. Zim was not sure whether to reply in horror or in wonder.
"Equestria...", Zim pondered on the name, "sounds stupid".
"OH trust me Zim!" Tallest Red commented, "The Equestriains are not to be taken lightly", Red explained. When hearing this Zim thought the Equestriains were a problem to Irken Race, he then felt honorable and then the duty to take on the mission! "MY SIRS....!" Zim annouced, "I WILL TAKE THIS MISSION!". The Tallest smirked devilishly at each other and went with Zim to the equipment station to take the out mission.
"Okay Zim", Red said, "You'll be needing a new disquise as well as a design for your headquaters''. Zim was paying attetion to every little word Red spoke, writing it down onto a note card. "My Tallest, I will need a new SIR Unit!", Zim annouced to his bosses.
"Why?" Red Replied, "What's wrong with your's?". Zim pointed to a corner of the equipment station where Gir was repeatedly hitting his head against a wall. "I'M A MOOSE!", shouted Gir. Tallest knew full well that they gave Gir to Zim as a joke, so they lied again! "Um....We would love to get you a new SIR Unit Zim..'' Purple anwsered, "But..uh....we're out". Zim looked disappointed,
"Alright my Tallest", Zim said. So Zim set out for Equestria in his trusty Voot Crusier into deep space.
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Alright I just quickly did some paragraphing and a few spelling correction, but I left most of the other mistakes in. I suggest getting a pre-reader to improve the quality of the structure.
Dat word count
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Cheers
~iraqlobstah
Well better start my own... WHY U TAKE THIS IDEA! Never mind, It's okay my story shouldn't be jeopardized. You have my approval.
402021I'll try not to!
402093You my friend, are awesome. You made crap into gold!
403075 Um no... No I didn't. I probably can. Hold On...
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My Little Invader
(MLP:FiM and Invader Zim Crossover)
Chapter 1: In the Beginning
In the land of Equestria peace is commonplace and the land lays still with serenity. But today, this isn't the case, because quietly up in the stars, Equestria has been selected to be part of the plan 'Operation Impending Doom 2'!
"Is this the planet?" Says a tall purple-armored alien, his eyes matching his armor.
"Yes, this is planet!", replied his similarly armored counterpart, the difference being in his red coloring. "This is the planet we're going to give to...you know who?" he says raising an eyebrow with a harsh tone in his voice. The invader in question is none other than Invader Zim!
Zim had completely destroyed 'Operation Impending Doom 1' and was later sent to Earth as a false mission. For the the past number of years, Zim has been fighting with his 'Arch-rival' Dib for domiantion of the planet. But now the Almighty Tallest have finally come up with a plan that can actually use Zim's disaster-pron nature for good use. ''So what happens now?", says Tallest Purple
"We contact Zim and tell him we've got a new mission for him".
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Meanwhile on the planet Earth, Zim had been chased into his house-like base by Dib. "FLITHY, EARTH, STINK MEAT! YOU WILL NOT ENTER THE FORTRESS OF ZIM!" Zim shouts locking the door behind him.
"You'll never win Zim!", exclaimed Dib, "I will beat you! I will save Earth! AND I WILL SHOW EVERYONE THAT YOU ARE AN ALIEN!" Shouted Dib, walking away and pointing at Zim's Base like an Angry Monkey.
"Computer! Has the Earth boy left yet?" Zim said to his CPU.
"Yes Zim" the Computer responds. At that very second the computer received a message, "ZIM! A message from the Tallest!". Zim eagerly jumps for joy and squeaks happily and turns on a transmitter to talk to his glorious leaders.
"Yes, my Tallest, you request my presence?", Zim says with a child-like tone in his voice, gushing with admiration.
"Yes we do Zim", says Red ,"You are requested to come aboard the Massive for a new objective!" Zim was a little bit stunned to hear this. Since landing on Earth, his prime objective had been to take over, but he had made it a personal goal to destroy Dib.
"But my Tallest!..I have not finished business with the Earth Monkies! I STILL HAVE MUCH TO DO!" Zim was about to give as many other reasons why not to leave Earth as he could, but the Tallest were already in the radius of the Earth, so they teleported Zim and his assitant Gir aboard the Massive.
"Ah! There you are!" said Tallest Purple, "We started to think you didn't want this mission!".
"But I don't!", said Zim, "I still have much to do! My battle with the hippo-headed boy has not yet finished!" The Tallest look at each other and look back to Zim who was almost at the verge of tears.
"Stop whining Zim!" Red Snapped, "We have a much better mission for you to accomplish!" Red continued, "We've found a planet that's just right for Impending Doom 2". Zim looked puzzled and a bit interseted.
"Really?" Zim perked up a bit. Purple took over the talk, "Yes, we found the ideal planet, not even a stup......ENDOUS invader such as yourself would have a problem with it". Purple quickly corrected himself.
"So what's the name of the doomed planet?", Zim asked.
"The planet is known as......Equestria." Red replied. Zim was not sure whether to reply in horror or in wonder.
"Equestria...", Zim pondered on the name, "sounds stupid".
"OH trust me Zim!" Tallest Red commented, "The Equestriains are not to be taken lightly", Red explained. When hearing this Zim thought the Equestriains were a problem to Irken Race, he then felt honorable and then the duty to take on the mission! "MY SIRS....!" Zim annouced, "I WILL TAKE THIS MISSION!". The Tallest smirked devilishly at each other and went with Zim to the equipment station to take the out mission.
"Okay Zim", Red said, "You'll be needing a new disquise as well as a design for your headquaters''. Zim was paying attetion to every little word Red spoke, writing it down onto a note card. "My Tallest, I will need a new SIR Unit!", Zim annouced to his bosses.
"Why?" Red Replied, "What's wrong with your's?". Zim pointed to a corner of the equipment station where Gir was repeatedly hitting his head against a wall. "I'M A MOOSE!", shouted Gir. Tallest knew full well that they gave Gir to Zim as a joke, so they lied again! "Um....We would love to get you a new SIR Unit Zim..'' Purple anwsered, "But..uh....we're out". Zim looked disappointed,
"Alright my Tallest", Zim said.
So Zim set out for Equestria in his trusty Voot Crusier into deep space.
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Yeah I gave up XD Not gonna bother expanding this.
Invader Zim and MLP, has the potential to be AWESOME so you better do this well, or New Fluttershy will find you.
Invader Zim and MLP, has the potential to be AWESOME so you better do this well, or New Fluttershy will find you.
403198NO That's perfect!
403198NO That's perfect!
404209Well if done perfectly it is, if it's not (like right now) It can't. XD
OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD this is the greatest day ever!
aside from the spelling it is amazing
490101Thanks. Like I said I'm not the best speller.
Cool concept. :D
.............yes yes yes YES!!!!
more GIR!
Dude. I totally love it... but you made me have to come up with a different name for my MLP/IZ fic....
I can't even understand this. Clean up your dialogue, dumbass. Sorry for the hate, but seriously. Each new character should have a new paragraph when they speak. Go read the writer's guide and clean this up. Then I might reconsider my thumbs down.
2803567 I can understand your hate! :)
I have the worst literary skills to present to this site!
The grammar and dialogue will eventually get better over the many chapters....hopefully.
So thanks for the Opinion, but me...a Dumbass?!...Wait no, you're right. XD
Thumbs Down mean a lot more than a random meaningless Thumbs Up.
I can imagine the last few sentences being a scene with zim kicking gir since the show is known to be random as hell
Ok this is the best fim fic iv'e read so far!
Please, more characterization on ZIM!!!!!
And Gir too, he's cool
:D been waiting for a be episode... Too bad is so short. O well
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Yeah, about that.
I don't know if I'll continue this story. I never get around to write something.
But maybe if someone is willing to join up with me to finish it, maybe it'll a more concrete schedule.
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Man, alright. Even if I'm not the best... I'll help. Let's continue this through PM
You may want to explain some stuff next time. Because why in the hell would someone as homicidal, batshit crazy and unhinged as zim say sorry to a skittles pony?.... He'd probably laugh at them and break his disguise by accident but he wouldn't randomly say sorry! Also why'd the skittles show up out the blue?