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TimesX
I tend to be more romantic than I am poetic.
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While I wouldn't exactly be averse to another one, I'm personally far more interested in the continuation of "Heaven's Gift".
7884287 Ha, glad someone likes that dusty old story of mine. Still writing it atm. but I'll get there
7884287 What is Heaven's Gift?
ME WANT MORE NOW!!!!!
Oh the questions and the possibilities, this happen after Celestia encounter? I know you say it stand on its own, but there is clues? how the public react to the new king? how Twilight will react? how Celestia? is she going to be happy? maybe jealous? so yeah…I would love more of this, if it is possible
7884354 It's my non-clopfic story which focuses on a 10 year-old genius who is sent to Equestria scientifically (yes, not magically). There, he encounters young (9 year old) twilight where he discovers the existence of elements outside of science present in other worlds and dimensions bla bla bla.
Knowing the writer I am, must I need say that there is romance there (human x pony)
Great story, I hope there's a fourth entry soon.
Ofcourse we need more of these!
I would certainly welcome a sequel.
That ending is begging for a sequel itself
I love this series!
A good read, would definitely like to see more. That ending though... it absolutely begs for more
Moar please!
more please. this needs a sequel.
O-Oh my
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Ooooh man. I would love to see where this goes. Like, actually pregnant or having to be pulled aside by Celestial and get a talkin to? From waifu to crazy in moments, man.
Wait a minute he was in a relationship with Twilight then Celestia got to borrow him for one night, then Luna comes and now they are married? Or was this more of an indirect sequel?
Thus needs a sequel. He's got his own little collection of love drunk royals. How will tia and purple smart feEl about it? Are they pregnant as well? Oh, there's a scary thought.
Sequel? Pretty Pony Please
Sounds like a vanilla hentai...
7894699 ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ) I have my sources.
7894921 Don't we all.
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Lol for the heck of it, I might even write a non-clop extra chapter which elaborates on the guy discovering he just made Woona pregnant XD
Now that i think about it, that ending does beg for something extra
This was a solid read, but there were more errors than there otherwise should be. Grammatical, punctuation, extra words that don't belong, things like that.
Try be more inventive with your terms for genetalia. A lot of it came expectedly once you established what words you like to use. For example, instead of saying 'meaty', say something like 'firm'. Mix things up a bit to keep it interesting.
Synonyms are your friend! Hell, even getting politically correct by saying things like 'vagina' and 'vulva' can work wonders. Up the strength of the words to things like 'pussy', and even 'cunt' works well in some cases. The longer the sex scene goes on, your words should evolve to reflect the intensity of the situation.
I don't know who edited this, if anyone, but it'll do well for quality to have someone that knows what they're doing to look it over.
7923779 Heh, there's no one in this world who believes that I need improvement in execution more than I. Though I admit, not to justify myself of being lacking, but to allow a better understanding of my situation, that English is not even my native language. However, it is the language which the magical ponies originally use and it is the language through which majority of the fandom and co. (EQD, FimFic) communicate.
It's a pain really to generate ideas and express them through a medium not present at birth. It's a miracle how I'm even capable of naming at the very least five English animals on a whim. As a very busy student with subjects barely containing English in them (Philosophy, Science, and Math) which are written by using mixed characters that don't exist in the English alphabet, creating the time to expand my knowledge in the English language is in fact, very difficult.
I appreciate you pointing out my mistakes and even giving me a "solution" to those problems, but I cannot say with confidence that I am left unhurt by your last comment as I am the sole writer and editor of all the stories I publish. In my area, or even in my school, only those who major in foreign language courses are capable of even understanding what I write. Other than that, they would all prefer to read 中國的小說.
Sure, feel free to describe this passage as a "butthurt comment," I will try my best to accept it. But please, respect the effort I've invested in my stories— not by showering me with praise and glory or even complimenting what I have achieved, but by giving me what you think could have been improved and what was lacking (as you had done just now and for which you have my thanks). My message may come off as a type of "attack" towards you, but understand it as much as I have understood yours. I have no intention of picking a fight as that would have been a waste of precious time, but at the very least, I want you to understand that sometimes, people just can't help it. It is only due to my passion for the English language that I have spent countless hours of my free time reading grammar books meant for elementary students. I try, quite hard, to improve my English to match one who was born surrounded by it. But as you can see from my writing, my native language has still set barriers which are more than difficult to overcome.
7925721 I completely understand and respect language barriers and the difficulty they can bring, however, there's nothing stopping you from seeking help with regards to editing and proofreading.
7926306 ...Never mind, trying to get my point across will most likely take more time than whipping up a new story.
WOW!
'Tis there is a lot of pleasure in these words.
Luna, a wife and a mother!
A human, who may live another 60 to 80 years, a husband and a father!
Equestria will never be the same!
That was great and a sequel would definitely be awesome.
I demand a sequel! After all if the three princesses love him what about a heard?
Oh Twilight's not gonna like this...
More!
Well played...
Actually, I would like to see a sequel to all of these. I think it would be interesting to see all three mares sharing him, the lucky bastard.
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Believe me, I am trying my best to give it my best in finding the motivation. I'm halfway through, but my problem is finding a cover pic
It short and to the point but all I can say is MORE
PLEASE!!!! I love this story and can’t wait to see what’s next.
If I may I love love to see no only Luna but all 3 devoted to being his wife and mean kids to be made from the love thay share with him and each other.
I BEAT THE FUCK OUT OF MY DICK SO GODDAMNED HARD I CANT FEEL MY LEG! MY LEFT LEG HAS GONE COMPLETELY NUMB!
~EatThatPussy445
If anyone remembers this memes your a meme lord
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Why not? Is it because Luna will so be busy raising her child that they can't hang out anymore?
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No offense, but is there a fandom consensus as to whether or not polygamy is legal in Equestria?
Just out of curiosity, why? Does Luna want to get pregnant?
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Well she's felt alone and neither her nor celestia are actually mothers. While Celestia sees everyone in her kingdom as her children and loved by all...Luna isn't as liked and she also feels alone. She's also the younger of the two and more liable to want a child.
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Just out of curiosity, what do you believe the limits of Luna's powers in dreams are? Whose dreams can she enter and what can she do while there?
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I think her limits are that she can manipulate the dream or talk to the person, maybe cause nightmares but I don't think she can physically harm someone in a dream. Being able to enter dreams and change them is a powerful gift but one with limits. I doubt she could bring more than one person into a dream if any.
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It's just that I've had a recurring dream where Luna wants to have my children. What do you think you'd do?
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Me? I'd be very confused and ask why. I wouldn't say that's a bad dream but if anything, the moment I'd get control of my dream I would be falling from orbit or maybe going to a place I created a long time ago. She could come with since it's always night there technically but whatever you would do is up to you.
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I don't see how the time of day would matter, but if it did, Equestria could also be in another time zone.
Funnily enough, someone told me he had a dream about Luna possibly being kidnapped, but night was never a thing in Equestria at that time of year, which means that if that's true, Equestria will see three continuous months of nighttime starting in June.
So do you think this is also because she is lonely?
So - what? The fourth installment - "Dominating Princess Cadence"? ;]
Now that has all three princesses pregnant it’s time for him to enjoy one big happy family in the bed