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Thank you for the advice; I will do it that way next time. I had never done a dream sequence before, so I was going by the seat of my britches on this one! I might try to break that chapter into parts in the next few days. I have been running into issues with this (((part))) of the story, and I feel that I might need to make it a multi-part section of the story. People asked for more about Site 103 and Stable 103, so I think it will eat nearly 100k words when it is done. Thank you for taking the time to comment; so many people will downvote and move on. I am still learning as a writer, and to be perfectly honest, I was a foreign student of English. It's one of my many failings, one I am very ashamed of, but one that many have been helping me to overcome! So, again, thank you!

Neat to see that Fimfiction thinks our stories are similar.