First thing first, I would like to that my Co-Writer Sk8erdude!
Dante comes back to Ponyville after finishing his journey of performing music in different parts of Equestria. He sees things have changed in the town he once lived in while he was gone. When he comes across an old friend, a certain yellow Pegasus, Fluttershy. He starts having very strong feelings about her since he left her. But another stallion also had strong feelings about Fluttershy while Dante was gone, his best friend, Reda.
Chapters (20)
Thank you all for reading this fic. I didn't expect this story to be up until tomorrow, but it's great either way.
If the picture is that got your attention I'm sorry to say we will be changing it later today.
Once again "thank y'all for comin'!" Sorry, my southern side had to be shown.
849907
Not bad, here are some minor mistakes:
-Two misspells that went on.
Cheerelie-Cheerilee
Manehatton-Manehattan
-You could fix your grammar in a few spots
And you're welcome. Keep going with this.
850039
Thanks and I knew I that I spelt those to wrong ill change it now. Thanks for the help bud.
850039 Are you sure its not Manehatten instead of Manehattan?
great story.
850234 I checked the MLP wiki, sources, and the origin. I also have auto-correct for the real name (Manhattan), so I'm 100% sure.
850234
Thanks I just put this up to see if my Colleague liked how I put it. He said he loved so I'm gonna do the 'Hoof'reading (crappy joke I know.) and he has all the ideas. I also asked him to do the writing for Reda's character, so if you see a difference In writing, you have been warned.
Besides all that, thanks!
Dun dun dunnnnn!
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One word to say: AWESOME!!!
899736
Thanks that means a lot.
Well we have bad news ponies. Sk8erdude will be out for while because of technical problems so it will take a lot longer to make the next few chapters but dont worry it won't take to long.
well then, this will be most certainly exciting...
OMC PLEASE DON'T KILL FLUTTERSHY.
Well.... this is getting interesting
Im laughing my ass off! your story happens to be similar to mine
My oc Dante Flash comes to ponyville after being away for years, and ends up being Fluttershy's old friend! I think its kinda funny how both of our fan fics are similar! and I do have to say your story is great! Hope you have time to read mine!
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I didn't think I would meet somebrony who's story would be similar, but hey it's all good. I'll read your story ASAP.
Man this is a huge coincidence!
1561263 kewl thanx! I just made chapter 5! so happy reading!
wait, why'd he commit suicide?
GOD DAMMIT I THOUGHT THIS WAS ANOTHER DREAM!
Ding, Ding, Ding. We got ourselves a winner. Guess what son, you just won yourself a one way trip to hell.' That was