Needing more story here!
Also, you’re switching between he, him and I alot.

Great so far. Though there are a few errors I saw.

Good to see Tails being used as a Displaced. ^^

Some places you change from 1st to 3rd person, like "had to stop MY hands from trying to use HIS boss' metal to make MY own inventions".

Oh I LOVE this story so far and can't wait to see what happens next, it would be cool if Tails beats old man Starswirl, heck it would be funny to see how Celestia and Luna will react if Starswirl were to tell them he lost to a young 2 tailed fox and describes how he looks and they would remember he was the one who stole one of Discords Chaos Emeralds. So what will Tails do once he has all 7 Chaos Emeralds, will he go after the Master Emerald too or just leave that with the Alicorns, I would think he would try to use the 7 Chaos Emeralds to make his version of the Floating Island then so he will have a place to call home along with it being his own personal base to go off to when he doesn't want to be found.

Despite few errors here and there, this is probably one of the best beginnigns of a story, and definitely the best for the displaced one.

Shadow: This is going to be a Mortal Chess Kombat, in my opinion.

(Disclaimer I don't own Mlp or Tails the fox along with the image used as the cover which was made by EvanStanley from Deviant art.) (A Displacer story for those who don't like them to know.)
I have never been one for interacting with people or well even one that deals with violence I have always been one that would usually avoid it while I could. I am still hoping to keep it that way even know I will seem to need to hang around people much more then hoped. All because of a single statue I wanted to add to my collection I have.

Then with some time to think one single thought went through my head "What am I going to do without technology?" Then I thought I have a genius' mind why not use it to help their technology along a bit faster. Though the main question I have is which nation to start in it and how to keep it from going to certain areas of technology that I would find unfavorable.

You should probably add another empty line between the part where you write as the author and where you start writing in character.
I hope this was helpful to you

Thre grammar seriously needs work, otherwise its great. Also some things seem to be laxking details, I didn't even figure out the tournament was Chess until the very end! Rather confusing.

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Well I am going to start looking for a proofreader to help and yeah I was going to save most of the details for the tournament next chapter. So the last round with Starswirl will be more detailed.

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What I think the author was thinking is that, it was more a accident that he used chaos control

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The grammar isn't that bad I honestly didn't notice that that much but I think it's really good. This is the only human turned into tails story I can find.

ERMIGERD!!!! I NEED MORE!!!!!

Good story is good 'like'

Love this story