Despite each having their own rooms, five mares sat huddled together in the Canterlottian night, whispering in conspiratorial tones about the mare not present, and the changeling who was with her.
“That was weird, right?” Princess Twilight asked, her purple eyes glistening in the light of Luna’s pale moon. “Fluttershy has gotten more confident since we first met, but that was like watching an entirely different mare!”
“Fluttershy does have a history with guys though.” Pinkie happily chipped in. “I mean, Discord, and Zephyr, and Angel and Iron Will. They’ve all learned stuff from her! Iron Will’s less of a meany pants, Discord’s not super-duper evil anymore, Zephyr’s learning not to be all lazy-wazy, and Angel…. Well, I don’t know if Angel’s really all that different without her.”
“Allan’s getting more confident too.” Applejack offered her own two-bits, not wanting her opinion’s to go entirely unvoiced. “Why, whenever he helps out at the farm, we get twice as much done in half the time!”
“And he doesn’t wear his hood up anymore. When he first went out into Ponyville, he wouldn’t even look at anypony! Now he could be any normal pony.” Twilight exclaimed.
“Yeah.” Rainbow hadn’t said much up until that point. “While I was panicking over the poison joke, he just kept me focused on getting right on over to Twilight, even after I burned his face by accident. I don’t think the Allan who first came here would have been able to do that.”
Twilight nodded in agreement. “Well, he’s definitely improving, but to be honest, I’m not entirely sure why.”
Rarity burst out laughing, her elegant dressing gown and mane curlers almost hiding her face from view in the dark room. “Really darling? You don’t understand?” She covered her hoof with her mouth, snickering. “I understand perfectly.”
“You…. do?” Applejack asked, head cocked to one side. The Earth Pony mare tried to figure out what her Unicorn friend was going on about, and she wasn’t entirely happy when she did. “Wait, really? Them two? You gotta be jokin’ Rarity!”
“Ooh! Ooh! Are they… playing a game? Are they betting each other? Daring each other? Are they-” Pinkie’s stream of suggestions was cut short by Rainbow Dash’s hoof in her mouth.
“Okay AJ, what’s Rarity going on about?” The athletic pegasus asked, before she jerked her hoof away from Pinkie with a cry of disgust as the Pink Pony gave Rainbow's hoof a big, wet, slobbery lick. Pinkie fell over laughing.
“Rarity thinks Fluttershy and Allan have the hots for each other.” Applejack said, directing a glare Rarity’s way.
“What?” The fashionista asked, her eyes big, in an attempt to look innocent.
“Y’all know what. Y’all need to stop readin’ them trashy romance novels!”
“Ugh! They are not “trashy”!” Rarity protested.
“Does the hot guy and cute gal get together at the end an’ ride off into the sunset?”
“Well….sometimes.” Rarity admitted.
“Trashy romance novel.”
“You take that back!” Rarity’s indignant tone raised her voice a few octaves.
Applejack was about to respond when a sleepy voice drifted in through the door. “Um… girls… could you keep it down. We’re trying to sleep.”
The group immediately fell silent.
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The world about them was one of bright purples, navy blues and shimmering, and bright, fluorescent plants that existed nowhere else. Stars shimmered above them, and the moon hung heavily overhead. It was a world tailored to the mare who inhabited it, one of quiet, peaceful serenity, where she could think, or just relax.
However, unlike the grand majority of nights, the dream was no longer inhabited by just one, but instead by two. The two figures played chess, and talked about the nature of the universe. They talked about life. About hardship and pain. And, as Allan was just about ready to call it a night, Luna brought up one final topic.
“What do you think about love?”
Allan raised an eyebrow, or what passed for one, in query. “What do you mean?”
Luna chuckled, moving a chess-piece with her magic. “I mean, what do you think about love? How you experience it, what it means…. Who you love.”
Allan moved a knight to take her bishop. “Well, love is something that’s different for everyone, right?”
“True. But I’m asking you.” Luna’s queen rushed in to take Allan's rook. “What does love feel like for you?”
Allan paused, floating his queen up in the air as he tried to answer Luna and decide where to place his piece. He settled on keeping his Queen out of reach as he answered. “Well, for me… it’s kinda like….an adventure that you share. A warm feeling of: “yeah, we did that.” Does that make sense?”
Luna chuckled, using a knight to take a bishop. She inspected the defeated piece for a moment, before setting it down on the large, flat mushroom being used as a table. “Yes. Would you say it’s also a bond of trust?”
“Definitely.” Allan answered, taking a pawn. “Why do you ask?”
“Well, do you recall what I said about how long it’s been since I could talk to anypony like this?” Allan nodded. “The last pony I did this with was my guard captain. When he played, the board pieces resembled those he loved and trusted.”
Allan turned his gaze back to the board. It was only now that he noticed the designs each piece had, with each being personalized to their respective player. The King, for Luna, was a carving of Celestia, while her Queen was a replica of herself. Her bishops were the Element bearers, separated evenly between the two pieces. The knights were a pair of regal looking ponies, an Alicorn mare and a Unicorn stallion, though Allan had no clue who they were. The Rooks were royal guards, one day, and one night, respectively. The pawns were each random ponies, save for one that was actually a carving of the three Cutie Mark Crusaders.
For Allan, he found his pieces to be… unexpected. The pawns were blank, just the same as a normal chess set, but the rooks were his extended family, his cousins and aunts and uncles, and the Knights were his friends; Josh, Mike, and…. Anna? Allan raised his eyebrow at that. The bishops were….equally surprising. One bishop consisted of his parents, Richard and Mary, and the other were the easily recognizable figures of Twilight, Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie. The king
Was himself, both as a human, and as a changeling, but the figures seemed to be almost…..jostling each other for position. The Queen captured his gaze though. The Queen was made of three figures, and he was surprised to see that, alongside his sister, Katie, was Luna herself, and, above them, Fluttershy.
“I… don’t understand?” Allan returned his gaze to the ruler of the night. “What does that mean?”
Luna smiled again, resetting the board so that every piece was back in order. “Perhaps you should evaluate it based on the game’s rules? Which pieces are most important, and why? How have these individuals affected your life?”
Allan looked down at his pieces, examining each of them. “Well….my extended family…..I barely see them, but they’re always supportive. My friends…. Well, my friends are awesome! We’d always hang out, we’d go exploring, we’d do all sorts of stuff together…...That doesn’t answer Anna though! She was-no, is, my girlfriend!”
Luna looked at the pieces, eyebrow arched. “You already know why. The board decides which person goes on which piece based on your subconscious. You know the truth, but accepting it might take a little more time.”
Allan grunted. He didn’t want to say anything, for fear of overstepping his bounds, or being rude by saying he thought her board was being stupid. He took a deep breath, and then chose to focus on the rest of his pieces, starting up again with the bishops. “Twilight and her friends… they’ve been helping me out, even when they’ve only known me for a few weeks. I have so much to thank them all for….” Allan smiled at the thought of Twilight, Rainbow and Rarity’s lessons, Applejack’s
Acceptance and Pinkie’s….. craziness. “And my parents are obvious. I love them so much, and…… I miss them. Katie….she’s my older sister. I’ve always looked up to her. She’s always managed to reach any goal she sets, no matter how long it takes. She’s brilliant.” Allan took a deep breath before continuing. “You… I’ve only met you once when I was awake, and twice now when I’ve been asleep. I guess I trust you because you genuinely seem to be interested in me, and my well-being.” Luna gave an agreeing nod and a happy smile. “And Fluttershy? Well….I…..She…..” Allan found that he just didn’t know where to begin. Fluttershy had already done so much to help him that….
“You trust her.” Luna answered her own question. “She’s let you share her home, she’s looked after you, without reason or reward. She cares about you.” Luna’s face turned into a mischievous smile. “And you like ‘like’ her, as I believe the saying goes.”
Allan felt his cheeks burn. “Whu-what? No I don’t! I have no idea what you’re talking about!”
“Please Allan, do not try to deny what your subconscious is telling you.” Luna paused, taking the time to put all the pieces back where they had been before she had reset the board. “The people you love and trust most are often one and the same. Thanks to the help of Princess Twilight and her friends, I have come to better appreciate both my sister and myself. The captain who last played? I watched his pieces over the years, and they slowly changed. First, he found a mare he liked, and she was placed as a bishop. Then, over time, they fell in love, and she rose up to the Queen position, alongside the captain’s mother, Tia and myself. Then… they married, and she joined him on the king piece. Do you see where I’m going with this?”
“I think so.”
“Now think about how you feel about Fluttershy.”
“Well….I admit, I do like her. She’s smart, and funny, and kind. She was willing to help me even when she had no reason to trust me. She’s pretty, but not flouncy. She’s confident, but not brash. She’s….well, she’s wonderful.”
“I thought so.” Luna smirked. “You are falling in love.”
“But, I’m already in love with Anna!” Allan protested. “I couldn’t-”
Luna reached across the table and shushed him with a hoof. “Allan, calm down. Just…. Think about what I said, and you’ll understand.” Her eyes grew distant for a moment, before she blinked.
“Dawn is almost here I’m afraid. It looks like we’ll have to finish our game another time.” Luna stood, her magic causing the board to fade away. “I hope you have a good day, Allan.”
Before Allan could offer a reply, Luna simply vanished, and her dream world joined the chessboard in oblivion. The fading world deposited Allan back in the familiar void, which, after the lovely scenery of Luna’s imagination, was a big downer. He was left alone in that void to ponder the night’s discussion, and after a few minutes, all he had to say was:
“Huh….”
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Katherine Ryder sat behind the wheel of her car, her fiancée sitting in the passenger seat beside her. She had been staring at the front doors of the hospital for some time, her right hand on the wheel and her left on her forehead. Jeremy, her fiancée, remained silent. It wasn’t often that his wife-to-be had to work up the courage to do anything, but getting out of the car and going in to see her brother was something even she required a little time to prepare for.
She pulled her long, brown hair up into a ponytail, using a headband she usually kept on the dashboard to hold it all in place. Jeremy still didn’t say anything, even as Kate opened the door and stepped out, taking a deep breath as she did. Her strides were full of purpose, the goal she had in mind driving her on.
The pair entered through the main doors, and went straight for reception, asking for her brother by name. After the secretary pulled up the records and checked them for the name, they were directed right to the hospital’s Recovery Ward.
They found the room quite easily, presided over by an exhausted looking Doctor, who’s surname was Kim. With him were Richard and Mary, Katie and Allan's parents. It had been almost three weeks now, since his accident, and he had yet to wake up for more than a few incoherent moments at a time.
“Hey mom. Hey dad…” Katie greeted them, trying to keep her voice from shaking. “How… how is he?”
Doctor Kim gave her a wan smile. “A little better. He’s been improving somewhat, over the past few days. My fellow doctors and I are hopeful that he’ll regain consciousness soon.”
“What about his memory?” Katie dreaded the answer, but this was her baby brother. She had to know the truth.
“We…. we aren’t sure.” Doctor Kim replied, hesitantly. “The head trauma he received may have caused him to develop the condition, but until he wakes up, I’m afraid we just can’t tell.”
Allan, as if on cue, let out a very quiet groan. The room fell silent, it’s inhabitants attention all turned to the figure in the bed. He did not stir any more, and the growing hope felt by all was dashed to pieces by his continued comatose state.
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Night fell, and the hospital grew quiet, many of the numerous visitors going home, and those that stayed settled in for the long night. Katie sighed, looking out of the window in Allan's room at the departing form of her parents car. She had told them to go home and get a proper night's rest, as they had been spending as many nights as they could by their son’s side and were understandably suffering from exhaustion.
Jeremy was already asleep, snoring softly in his chair, covered by his big jacket. She smiled, taking the time to re-acquaint herself with the man who had stolen her heart. He was a skinny man, with glasses and a mop of curly, ginger hair that framed a young-ish face that was dotted with the occasional freckle. He was quite handsome, despite the strange, age old, belief that ginger people were ugly devil-spawn. She’d never understood how such a loving and generous young man could be labeled as either ugly or devil spawn, simply by way of his hair colour, but Katie had long ago given up on pretending the human race was anything but weird. She often thought of how he reminded her of the actor Eddie Redmayne; kind of geeky and a little odd, but with a heart of gold.
She smiled again, before she let her gaze fall back to her brother. Allan had always been rather against Jeremy and Katie, but for the most part, it had just been for a laugh, Allan's protectiveness of his big sister was played up for humour, and not because he actually disliked Jeremy. Not that it mattered right now. Even if he wanted to, Allan couldn’t take the piss out of Jeremy.
Katie grimaced, taking note of the time that read on the clock while she settled down in an unoccupied guest chair to wait out the next few hours. She stared out the window, gazing up at the cloud covered stars, wondering if Allan was dreaming about them.
“Here’s to your good dreams, little brother.” She murmured, imagining Allan dancing among the stars in his dreams. The thought made her smile as she finally settled into a comfortable spot.
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Katie woke up, a foul taste in her mouth and bleary as she looked across to the bedside table, she easily spotted the digital clock sitting by the bed, telling her that five hours had passed. Groaning, she rubbed her eyes and sat up. She stretched out her muscles and splayed out her fingers in an effort to increase her blood circulation. A hint of nausea hung about her, the foul taste on her tongue not doing her any favours.
Looking towards Allan, she stopped, eyes wide and her mouth flopping open.
Allan Ryder, a confused, sleepy look on his face, was awake. His bandages were stretched and contorted around his body, and he looked terrible, but he was awake.
“Hrm…..Katie…? Wha’s goin’ on?” He looked around, a bewildered expression taking over his features. “What happened….? Why are we in a hospital?”
Tears welled up in her eyes, and she found herself moving before she even knew why. She practically flung herself at him, wrapping her arms around him in a great big, tear-stained hug. “You’re awake! You’re awake!” She blubbered, over and over, unable to stop.
“Yeah….I’m awake. How long was I asleep for?” He asked.
“What do you mean?” Her joy warped into dread. “Don’t you remember what happened?”
“Umm…..I’m gonna go with no……” Allan replied, pushing her back a little. “Last thing I remember was going to bed after Dad’s birthday. We went and saw that spy movie, um…. Bourne?”
Katie felt her blood drain. Their father’s birthday was only a few weeks away. If the last thing Allan remembered was from their dad’s birthday when they went and watched that movie…
“Katie? What’s wrong?” Allan asked. Katie looked into his eyes, and through her sadness, she noticed something. Allan had always had a mole on his cheek, under his left eye.
It wasn’t there.
Allan's mole, since he had had since birth, wasn’t there.
As if she had a veil lifted from her eyes, she noticed another thing about him that just didn’t make sense. While his face was the same and emoted the same way it always had, his eyes had a….distance to them. A falseness, as though it was all just an act. Katie felt her blood run cold. Her tears stopped.
This wasn’t Allan.
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Standing in the hospital window, Chrysalis growled as the boy’s sister drove away. She’d noticed something, and now Chrysalis’s plan was going to have to be dealt with very carefully. If the girl shared her doubts with others, then that could spell disaster for the Queen.
This half of the hospital was more or less hers now, but that didn’t mean that the charade of normalcy could come down. When another Doctor came in Chrysalis could tell immediately that it was one of her new drones, their growth having been sped up by the phenomenal amount of emotional energy that she had gathered for them. The first batch had only numbered twelve, but it wouldn’t be long now before she could produce a fertile drone and start an automated system, freeing her up to get on with other aspects of her plans.
“Report.” She snapped. Breeding the drones the way she had limited their individuality and independence somewhat, but that was for the best. The drone responded in an monotonous voice, it’s words perfectly pronounced and without emotion.
“The first batch seems to have taken hold effectively. The human should start experience the effects in a few more doses. The doses must be administered separately. They must be given a week between each dose, or the subject may die.” The drone gave its report without hesitation. It didn’t know to be afraid of the Queen if she received ill news. Thankfully, this wasn’t ill news for her.
“Good. Allan and his new….friends,” She spat out the word. “Will be most appreciative of my little surprise.” She smiled gleefully, wickedly. “What other news do you have?”
“The expansions to the lowest floor have been finished, and the entrance is properly concealed, as your majesty instructed.”
“Good. Start brewing the emotion gels I asked for. And make sure you follow each recipe correctly.”
“Yes, your majesty.” The drone responded, before turning around and walking swiftly off. Chrysalis let herself relax a little. Other than that annoying situation with the elder sister, which could be handled, if done carefully, the day wasn’t all that bad so far.
“Doctor Kim.” Chrysalis called. The hypnotized doctor stood a little straighter, and moved closer to receive his instructions. “Go to the other wards, and bring back a few other, non-controlled staff members. Try to act normal. Make up a believable excuse as to why you need their help. Once they’re here, I’ll do the rest.”
“Yes, my Queen.” Doctor Kim replied, then walked off, seeming to all the world like his usual self.
Chrysalis’s plans were proceeding swiftly. All she had to do was figure out how to keep the girl’s mouth shut. That would normally be easy, but she’d be on guard now. Chrysalis, still in the form of Allan, sat down in her hospital bed, and pondered.
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Katie was quiet. Normally, she would be the one driving, but Jeremy had been forced to take the wheel when it became obvious she wasn’t feeling up to it. He was definitely itching to ask her about it, but he just couldn’t seem to find the right words. Not that she wanted him to at the moment. She was a little busy trying to understand what she had seen.
She had seen a photo of him from just a few days before the crash. His mole had been there! It was only a small, dark patch of skin, but it had been there, clear as day! And when she had been with him in the hospital, it hadn’t been! It made no sense! And then there had been that empty, emotionless look in his eyes! Completely unnerving!
Her stomach rumbled loudly, and her nausea from earlier returned with a vengeance. She wanted to vomit, but found herself unable to do so, which in turn just made her feel even worse. With a sudden lurch, her stomach decided to open the floodgates, and only her quick reactions got her to keep the car’s interior clean.
“Oh, jeez!” Jeremy exclaimed. “Kathy, you okay? Do you need me to pull into a gas station or something?”
She frantically nodded, straining to keep herself from throwing up. Her whole body was, strangely, tingling. She launched herself out of the car and sprinted into the gas station Jeremy had pulled the car into, ignoring the surprised cries of the shoppers and the angry voice of the store clerk.
She found the bathrooms, and made a beeline for the toilet bowl, flinging her hair away from her mouth and letting the horrid bile do it’s thing shutting her eyes and trying to block out the smell of puke.
It took some time, but she finally felt her nausea subside, so she wiped her mouth with the back of her hand, and opened her eyes again.
The gelatinous mess in the bowl only vaguely resembled natural waste, and instead seemed to be attempting to emulate car oil in it’s disgusting, black sheen. Even as she considered it, she felt a sharp, stabbing pain in her head, making her clutch her temples with her ha-
Katie smiled, washing her hands off with the lovely hand soap that was in the dispenser on the wall. Whatever she’d eaten must have really disagreed with her, but she was still more concerned about Allan, and his strange inconsistencies. She walked back outside, apologizing to the store owner and the customers for making such a ruckus, and returned to the car. She felt bizarrely energetic though, but Kate blamed it on the relief of getting rid of bad food.
She sat back down in the car, giving a faint smile to Jeremy, who she assured that she was fine, closed the door, put on her seatbelt, and let out a happy sigh. “That feels so much better.”
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The early morning sun of Canterlot had crested over the mountains that morning with a shimmering hue of golds, yellows, oranges and reds, which would soon make way for the great blue of the oxygen rich skies.
The rays of light were towers of gold that challenged the majesty of the city they warmed, and invited those who were already awake to come and marvel in their spectacle. The weather patrols had put a few clouds in place, but the sky was bright and clear for the most part, something that Princess Celestia was quite proud of.
The great Alicorn of the Sun was always happy at precisely two times of day. At dawn, when she rose the sun, and during the twilight hours of the day, when she could set it, and spend a little time with Luna before the Solar diarch retired to her chambers for a good night’s rest. The importance of the rest of her schedule was all determined by what Raven, her first and foremost assistant, deemed was most important each day. There was very little the Solar Princess could do to
Change it that didn’t involve a massive catastrophe, or the biggest misuse of power in existence.
“Princess? May I come in?” The voice of Raven drifted in through the door.
“Yes Raven.” Celestia said, putting on her pubic ‘smile’ face. While with Luna and the other leaders of Equestria she could relax a little, the Equestrian public still required her best efforts. “You may enter.”
The pony who entered was a white coated unicorn with a dark brown mane, done up in a simple bun that kept it out of her eyes. She wore a short, red, ruffled cravat, and a pair of simple but stylish glasses. Grasped in her magic was a clipboard, which was close to full capacity.
“Good morning, Princess.” The unicorn greeted, bowing respectfully, but keeping it brief.
“Good morning, Raven.” The Princess returned the greeting. “So, what’s first on the agenda today?”
“Well,” Raven started. “There is a scheduled meeting with the Canterlot Lords to discuss taxes on their businesses at eight, followed by a public appearance for the opening of a new park in the lower city, a store opening on Mane St, and a new ward is opening in the hospital. Those are taking place at ten o’clock, eleven o’clock, and twelve thirty.”
“Those all sound wonderful.” Celestia intoned, inwardly sighing. “What else is there?”
“Princess Cadence has requested your expertise to assist in dealing with a trade dispute between the Crystal Empire and Zebrica. The meeting is scheduled for four.”
“Joy.” Celestia couldn’t help her flat, emotionless reply. “And what sort of paperwork is waiting for me?”
“Thankfully, not much today, Princess. Just a few issues that need to be resolved with an agreement or disagreement.”
Well, there was an upside. “And what of the day court?”
“Also quite small.”
Beautiful. Not such a bad day after all. “Oh, Raven, please remind me to organize a new gala ticket for a certain guest of ours. I’m quite interested to see how he’ll do.”
“The….Changeling?” Raven asked, not sounding very happy with the idea. “Are you sure that’s a good idea after the wedding?”
“It’s been years already.” Celestia replied, a tiny, weenie bit more icily than she would have liked, not that it was noticeable to any but Luna, or perhaps Cadence and Twilight. “It’s time for the elite to get over it. They weren’t the ones hanging upside down in a cocoon.”
Raven said nothing. Even she knew that Celestia found the nobles incessant worship and plot-kissing to be more than a minor irritant. There were standouts who were better than the others; such as Fancy Pants, and the Ponyville raised Rarity, both of whom had gotten more comfortable with the Princess, and thus had a better understanding of her, but for the most part, the nobles were a bunch of spineless, hoity-toity, moronic windbags, (Those were Celestia’s actual words on the
Matter.), who loved to hear their overly pampered tongues wag. “I want to soften the impact of Thorax and the other changeling’s. Allan is my best shot at doing that.”
Raven found herself questioning the Princess’s judgement. “Um, your highness…”
The Princess turned around, looking visibly concerned. “What is it, Raven?”
“It’s just…. I’m not sure that inviting him is the best idea, even if it’s morally right. The nobles don’t trust changelings at all. All they think they are is a bunch of monsters that attacked their city. And you just inviting one in and saying they’re good now? Ponies will think you’re under their spell. Paranoia has been festering in them for too long, your majesty! It’s just too dangerous.”
Celestia did not immediately respond. Raven had raised some excellent points. “The gala isn’t for a few weeks yet. We’ll have to set up a new security system that detects changelings upon arrival. Combining a detection spell with a barrier or shield spell shouldn’t be too hard.”
Raven didn’t want to object, even though she had something to say. It just didn’t solve the problem. “O-of course, Princess. I’ll see to it personally.”
“Good. I look forward to seeing Allan at the Gala. I’m sure that Rarity will make him look like a star.”
Raven kept quiet as she left the Princess’s quarters, check board in hoof, little, doubtful thoughts worming through her head.
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Raven not only did your princess ask you to invite Allan to the gala but she is your boss also, you best hop to it.
I like the chapter their is lots of things happening some good some bade.
Honestly, I'm kind of hoping the CIA just puts a bullet through Chrysalis head without fanfare and that will be it, because those are honestly the least interesting parts of the story and I don't like that subplot even a little. Once it starts to take center stage, I think it'll only drag this story down.
“Yes Raven.” Celestia said, putting on her pubic ‘smile’ face.
Little bit of a typo here, can you spot it?
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Oh Lawd, I can't stop the mental image of Princess Molestia's 'pubic' face! Why did you have to point that out? It is too much!!!!
I am Rarity in this scene
Hmm?
What the... this does not not seem to be Chryssie's doing
So you're going to throw a single changeling to the wolves in the middle of the place they consider their territory
Oh and let's not forget that said changeling is currently in a very mentally vulnerable state and was originally not a changeling and can therefore not really represent their race... oh yeah, this is not gonna end well
That’s not the problem
Raven, this is when you go over to Luna and inform her of what her sister intends to do so that she can deal with Celestia’s sudden case of "Bad Idea"