Follow the tale and story about the real truth behind the great and powerful yet still mysterious Star Swirl as told by (the) Princess Celestia to her student Twilight Sparkle.
Follow along as he takes on Discord, the Sirens, Nightmare Moon, Finding True Love, Finding the Alicorn Kingdom, Meeting Queen Chrysalis, Meeting the Alicorn King, Meeting young little Celestia and Luna, Teaching them, his apprentices, The Elements of Chaos, A Traitor, and even more fun packed filled adventure!
Want to know the real truth behind this great and powerful yet still mysterious wizard?
Read and find out...
Featured (as of 1/20/2017) on: Here
Note: This now has a Side Story to it called Banished and it is about what happens to the Sirens after they are banished so feel free to go and check that out if you want to.
Do you want some Journal Entries or not?
7858242
I think would be better to leave it how it is now.
7858432
THANK YOU!
And also you are first/ best/ only commenter so far.
Yeah. Honestly I DID NOT want to do journal entries, and besides, the BONUS little extras are enough for now.
But I do have a timeline for those who are confused by this.
Oh yeah, I just thought of some things that I had forgotten to say earlier:
- I would recommend getting rid of the "Second Person" tag, as it is not really in the second person.
- How is this story a crossover? If you cannot name a thing, I would recommend getting rid of the tag.
- I might add a "Drama" tag to this, but it is not necessary.
7860201
Does a crossover into other stories (AU or not) count?
Technically it still is second person since you have to remember that this is being told by Princess Celestia to Twilight, therefore the 'Star Swirl' may be changed to he at any time, after all, stories change each time that you tell them.
7861836
The "Crossover" tag is for if you combine, say, Halo and MLP. Or, Transformers and MLP... So no, I do not believe so.
And the "Second Person" tag is for stories with the reader as the main character, and sentences like this, "You walk over to the counter, and there you find a pineapple. You pick it up and look for a knife to cut it open with. Once you find the knife, you cut open the pineapple and eat it all."
(Links to second person stories- This one HERE and This one HERE.
7861932
Very well then...
It may not be top rated, but it still is on Page 1 of Longest.
https://www.fimfiction.net/stories?=&tags%5B%5D=c%3A130&=&order=words&=0&=0&=&=&=&=
Just a side note, I feel there are a lot of run-on sentences like this one, and if it improves in later chapters, sorry for bothering you.
7861932 crossover can be with other fics as well. It's for crossing over with work that is not your own university and is not an orginal univers of your own making.
7861836
Includes Luna and Chrysalis Tags too.
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Plot twist! Starswirl becomes an alicorn for no apparent reason, except to piss off people who hate it when ponies randomly ascend into alicorn-hood. :3