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I see people two ways who they are and who they can be.

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Word of advice: deleting comments doesn't help your story at all. If anything, it makes it worse.

7859102 Hey deleting comments that have nothing to do with the story but the cover art. I don't think it will hurt it that much.

Other then a few typo's i would like to read more..

Great work so far
I would really like to read how it began.
Nicely done with the names.
How when and why needs still anwsering how she landed on Equis, how she has kids...
When does your story begin
And are the ponies normal or Anthro?
You have not very many desciptions of the ponies in your text.
All in all very good, Makes hungry for more Apples ?

8153076 The second chapter will explain all of that and the ponies are normal, not anthros.

I always enjoy reading FIE stories. Yours is off to a good start.

I vote for these names......

Arkansas Black or Ark Boy

Ginger Gold Girl

:applejackunsure: I approve!

Comment posted by Worm-revolver deleted May 15th, 2017

8163547 First off it's grammatical, not gramatical and the second thing is I use four software programs dealing with spelling, punctuation you know grammar so when they say it's okay I' ll believe them before someone who doesn't think they need to use spellcheck. Plus what you call errors I call a southern drawl

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Comment posted by floppy_seal99 deleted May 24th, 2017

Where is the new chapter?

I vote for these...

Jonagold and Ginger Gold

... because they're twins they should have similar names.

well judging by the pattern of uploads the next chapter will be in 2018

Big Mac get hit buy a bottle yep that's happened if you don't knock on the door if someone in their

Another chapter
Tank you very much

Lad, You have a good Reason to delete comments? Trust me, It doesn't do any good to shove help away from you. When It comes to writing, Criticism is the best way to get better.
Give it a thought, Alright Lad?

if that picture is acuret then I can see why she would be intimidating

Why does a woman from eastern Washington have a thick southern accent?

Huh. Don't know why this has so many downvotes. This is pretty good so far. Can't wait for more.

Love the story I'm just waiting for an update on it now all your work is great as always

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