Chapter 2: Settling In
Later on, at Sugarcube Corner, Sturider was munching on a Jelly doughnut, as Twilight explained about Equestria.
"So, from my understanding, all inhabitants here are different species of equines, with dragons, griffins, and other unique creatures?" asked, Sturider.
"Correct." replied, Twilight.
"Interesting. My friends would be astonished to see this place. I've seen many unique species, but never have I've seen anything like this before." said, Sturider.
"Well, if you want, I could try to arrange to have you speak with our Princess." said, Twilight.
"I'd be honored to meet your leader. But for now I'd like to settle in here, is there anywhere I can put my cruiser so I can make repairs to it?" said, Sturider.
"Yer' glad to use mah' barn if ya' want." replied Applejack. "We'd even let ya stay with us too, if ya' want."
"Sure, why not?" replied Sturider.
"But before you settle in, I must say you really should let me help you with your outfit, it's just not fit to be seen on you!" said Rarity.
"I'd really appreciate it. And with the situation I'm in, I could use a different outfit than my Jedi robes." said, Sturider, looking down at his tattered and torn up Jedi robes.
"What situation?" asked Rainbow, suspiciously.
"I don't really wanna talk about it right now, but I'll share it later." replied Sturider.
"Okay then." said, Rainbow.
Soon, Rarity brought Sturider to her Boutique, after 2 hours, Rarity made Sturider a new outfit.
"So, how does it look, darling?" asked Rarity.
Sturider observed his new outfit, which had a dark blue shirt, a brown leather vest, and light grey pants. "This looks great, I really like this outfit." said Sturider.
"Thank you, Darling. It is my special talent after all." said Rarity, as she then showed her Cutie Mark to Sturider.
"That's quite the story there." asked Sturider, as he observed the 3 blue diamonds. "Well, I better get my shttle into the barn before dark, I don't want someone looting it." said Sturider, as he put his utility belt back on.
"Oh? Do you have expensive valuables in your ship?" asked, Rarity.
"Yeah, many beings in the galaxy will do anything to get belonging of a Jedi. And there's even some few who try to steal Lightsabers too." said, Sturider.
"Oh my." gasped Rarity.
"I know. Well, I'll be off then. Thanks, again Rarity." said Sturider as he left.
"That gentleman is quite the interesting one." said Rarity.
Soon, enough with help from Applejack, Sturider had gotten his shuttle into her barn and then as the Moon appeared, he then settled in his sleeping quarters in his ship.
"If only the Jedi Council could see all this now." said Sturider as he fell into a deep sleep.
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Not bad. Nice ideas here
7764315
It are they well executed?
7764376 well the whole story feels like it needs to slow up just a bit. Pacing is an issue but can be fixed
7764382
Yes, it can be fixed, but it rarely is.
7764385 that's really my only issue with this story is it seems like it's on a fast forward button
So you try to tell me, one hopeless Jedi dude, jut stole a whole Venator class cruiser, all alone, withouth notice, he just had the keys and got out of the dock, of Coruscant, like next to the clone and council headquarters?
Cuz, sure, a tiny little shuttle can escape the radars, a fighter with a hyperdrive yes. But a damn Venator just got loose? Huh, kudos for the guy then, mad stealing skills there.
Also you forgot to set the Human tag
Oh ok, correction time:
You clearly mixed up something buddy, blue and white spaceship, hatch just got loose and the cryotube just flew out, ok. let me give you some pics
This is a Venator class cruiser
vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/e/ec/Venator_clonewars.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20110918171254
You saw it in the Clone Wars
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You saw it in the movie
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And it was called the Jedi Cruiser yes.
But I think you refer to this ship then, it was used by the Jedi order, ordinary shuttle, possibly with cargo and sleeping quarters.
Also, it can rotate around itself
vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/8/85/T6Shuttle-SWE.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20120128072835
vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/1/1b/T6ShuttleUpright-SWE.png/revision/latest?cb=20120128154512
So yeah, from now on in my eyes our Jedi dude's ship is the T-6
Other than this, please for the love of damn god
Really, just hit that time as you can, it's too damn fast
7764420 It's not that kind of ship.
It's not even a real ship from the series, it's custom one Sturider Thom built.
7764315
Thank you.
7764523
Hmmm, fair enough then lol
But still, change your ship class, a cruiser is still a cruiser, maybe just say it's a shuttle of some kind then.
7764540
okay, sounds good enough, I shall.
Sounds interesting. Sometimes tells me that the Kids become jedis
7764633
We will see sometime later on.
Self-insert fics aren't recommended, you google. You've also managed to misspell Coruscant by the way.
-A guy that's only seen the movies once.
7764547 Is this story still alive? Also, SLOW THIS STORY DOWN! Even I can tell it's rushed, and THAT is saying something.
7771178
The story is still alive
and the next chapter will come soon, but I'm taking the time to write it.
7771449 Awesome!