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TheEveryDaySparkle


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After being defeated by the mane 6 in a foiled attempt to rule equestria with an iron hoof by infiltrating the wedding in Canterlot and being forced back to the hive, the changelings flew off with their tails between their legs. All except for one. Queen Chrysalis was banished to the desert to live out her days in isolation. She was given a single choice. Change her ways or be killed. She has only a month. Will she do it?

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A little bit too rushed in my opinion, which hurt a little bit the credibility of the character action. But who i am to talk about credibility in a world of ponies :trollestia:

7777136 I have to agree. I found myself too confused about where it was going at a certain point. I had intended for it to be five chapters, but I never intended them to be this short

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