I don't know if I like how they treat Coco in this story. Submission is one thing but it's more like he's a posession. Any time that any of the other girls want to do something with Coco, they ask Rarity if it would be okay, I mean come on, ask him for Harmony's sake. In this chapter Rarity asked his permission once, and it was about being watched. Not stripping off in front of others, on no, that's happening whether you like it or not.

I get that he enjoys it, but having such a casual disregard for his opinion is getting rather grating. I mean half the fun for a submissive is the surrendering. How can he do that if they never give him the chance.

Well I'll give you this...
You sure know how to make us wait...

Always a pleasure to read your updates.
This being no exception.

Hmm now I'm curious, does this mean that the girls can't take each other anally? Or simply that Twilight and Sunset choose not to do so right now? Either way, we know what's going to happen in Rarity and Coco's walk now

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The girls are just too big to take each other in the rear. When the magics happened, they were infused with masculine dongs while a femboy like Coco basically received the magical rump of dong absorbing. :) For lack of a better term!

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Thank you!

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Sorry! I had this latest chapter written a while ago, but forgot to post it. Though I'm not sure when I'll be writing the next, since it's an active commission.

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Without getting into too many spoilers, a future chapter that's been planned may address some of these concerns. Regardless, this story is never meant to come off as anything harder than a loving D/s relationship. I'll try to be mindful of how things come across in future chapters.

8530409 Okay, thanks for answering my comment, a loving D/s relationship is what I like to see.

To put my personal experience of this chapter into perspective, I'd like to quote Krieger:
STOP! My penis can only get so erect.

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Ah, the innocence of their youth. They really don't know what the human body is capable of, if properly trained. And if the other party is gentle.
I do believe that in a future time, beyond the scope of this story, they might realize that. Specially the science couple. But right now "magical rump of doing absorbing" made me lose it HARD
I'll send you the bill to recover my sides in low orbit

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Your writing is far more than impressive. I'm usually not in this kind of kink but you made something very strange sound so cute and innocent, even though it isn't at all. Dunno if you had some help or something, but this had me awestruck by looking on an editor point of view.

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Thank you, I appreciate hearing that. :)