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Femboy Coco Pommel has always been a delicate creature, but it wasn't until he started hanging around Rarity that his feminine side really started to come out. The two share a very loving friendship that turns into something more.
Wow, are the chapter dates accurate? I've really not updated this one since March? Time flies so much lately. Well, hope you think this cute chapter was worth the wait!
That's right, all the girls have been "blessed". And both Fluttershy and Rarity would rather give than receive? There's this potentially relevant tag on Derpibooru: Coco is an anal slut.
The biggest typo I see is a case of missing commas. It can be really noticeable in places, but otherwise this was excellently written, especially the gradual escalation of sexual tension. As for the question at the end, I'm betting on Rainbow or maybe one of the other more physically active girls. In terms of awkwardness, it seems most fitting for brash Rainbow to stumble in, only for the smooth and playful Rarity to convince her to stick around.
Wow, are the chapter dates accurate? I've really not updated this one since March? Time flies so much lately. Well, hope you think this cute chapter was worth the wait!
Because it's spoken out loud by Rarity, shouldn't this be she?
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You're right. Correcting it now!
All of us are horse smut sluts.
That's right, all the girls have been "blessed". And both Fluttershy and Rarity would rather give than receive? There's this potentially relevant tag on Derpibooru: Coco is an anal slut.
The biggest typo I see is a case of missing commas. It can be really noticeable in places, but otherwise this was excellently written, especially the gradual escalation of sexual tension. As for the question at the end, I'm betting on Rainbow or maybe one of the other more physically active girls. In terms of awkwardness, it seems most fitting for brash Rainbow to stumble in, only for the smooth and playful Rarity to convince her to stick around.
Well, hot damn. When things start getting truly hot they'll be flaming!
Please do give us more soon