• Published 29th Nov 2016
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Touch the Sun - little big pony

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Oh hell no, you can't just stop there

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That's right u lil shit I want more

HMB
HMB #3 · Dec 5th, 2016 · · ·

So wait.

Is he going to be a dad?

7772783 Yes, he can. :D

7772803 I don't know. The ending seemed a little vague.

Now there needs to be a sequel. This can't end here!

JBL
JBL #7 · Dec 5th, 2016 · · ·

Remove that 'complete' tag at once, Mister!

Also:

Ponies gasped at the princess’s announcement. They began whispering to each other. Many looked shocked, some looked excited, others looked confused. A chubby pegasus, not able to handle the news, slumped to the floor, out cold. But none were as shocked or floored as Jon.

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For now, all signs point to Jon and Celestia about to be parents.

NAISARUU

7772803 Yeah, but who's the mom?

That was wonderful, thank you. :pinkiesmile:

The end... :fluttercry:

THE END??? :raritydespair::raritycry:

NO! :flutterrage:

You MUST continue this! And side stories! We need SIDE STORIES!

NAO!

Please one more chapter you can't just leave us hanging like this!!

Aww. That was cute.

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At least an epilogue, if not a sequel.

You have to make a sequel!!!!!!

Um....m-mister little big pony, could we please get a sequel?..... P-please? :fluttercry: :applecry: :heart:

On a more serious note. This story was Incredible!!! I loved reading every second of it!!! You are without a doubt one of my most favorite writers.

I needs to see what baby is to look like!!!
NOW!

I want more story of this! :D

Hey, what's the polite way to demand a sequel again? :scootangel:

That was Sun awfully cute, it hurt so much.:raritydespair:

Sequel Please

Sequel. We still don't know if Luna also wants a child. he is her only chance afterall

The call for a sequel is strong in the comments

MORE! :flutterrage:


Please?:fluttercry:

I demand more. This is not an adequate stopping point.

I believe I speak for all of us when I say:

We NEED a sequel.

Thank you.
Sorry for the formatting, but I had a point to make.

I loved this story! I hope there will be a sequel.

Please Please Please!!!!! I beg you, sequel Please!:pinkiehappy:

Again you don't have to, just inner fan talking there.

Needs a dark sequel where the child is born with crippling deformities and is euthanized. Jon becomes a recluse and Celestia goes catatonic.

We need more :flutterrage:

Only if thats ok with you :fluttershbad:

Wow people have really taken a liking to this story, amazing really.

I would hopefully ask you to make a sequel or continue as a second chapter to this story the aftermath and how the pregnancy continues along and the birth of his child. It would make for a sweet ending and bring a tear or 2 to many here who love this.

Please do not let it end here and as much as a clop story we first thought this will be, this has surpassed beyond all expectations of tasteless sex scenes and things and made it into a real thing that has moved many way beyond even you probably expected.

dude it a beautiful end, does not need a epilogue, needs a continuation!

Plz sir. may we have some more chapters?:fluttercry:

Way to go! This was absolutely beautiful. So many feels... Wonderful, wonderful work :twilightsmile:

Helluva good story there.

I second a lot of these comments askin' for a sequel.

Carry on.

Wait? Does this means its over and the story ends here?!?

Comment # ∞ in wanting either more or a sequel. :scootangel: Please?

I'm at work right now, but I plan to post a more lengthy comment about what I thought of the story as a whole, later. :twilightblush:

This was sickly cute :pinkiesick: I like it, I like it a lot! :pinkiehappy:
Another! :pinkiecrazy:

Please? :pinkiesad2:

I DEMAND MOAR! We need more at once! With all possible haste!

A sequel would be nice. Really liked this story.

Really amazing story and I am hopping for a sequel.

Now I wonder what the baby is going to be like. The choice that I think has the most story potensial is a centaur, as I am curious how Equestria would react to their princess having a child of the same species as Tirek.

I don't know what you were thinking but that was too damn quick in the sequel better be coming out something along the lines of how to deal with a pregnant Celestia

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!


MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR!

Must see baby must see!

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