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Hodgepodge


"Darling darling darling!" said Twilight.

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Twilight Sparkle is used to being a little unicorn - except now she's an alicorn, and she feels anything but little. Luckily she's got a way to make herself feel like the ittybitty filly she sees herself as, but can she keep it a secret from her marefriend for much longer? And when Applejack finds out, what will happen next?

CONTAINS: TwiJack, some background FlutterMac, ABDL, regression, and padded pony princess posteriors.

(I've taken a lot of inspiration from one of my favourite writers, Applejinx. I get the feeling this isn't their thing, but if you like wild, beautifully written plots with lots of clop and rudeness you might want to check out their stories! I never would have written this weirdo diaper novel without 'em! ;p)

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Comments ( 30 )

Hey, if worse comes to worse you can just say this takes place before the end of Season 4. Problem solved. :ajsmug:

A good start so far, let's see where this goes and how much this affects Applejack and Twilight's relationship.

Hey Hodge, glad to see you posting again!

This was so sweet :heart:

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Hah! You're right - I completely forgot she was a princess for a while before she left the library. That's totally my excuse, then ;) I'm glad you're liking it so far. :)

Okay, this was an interesting chapter but it doesn't really follow up on the apparent cliffhanger from the previous one. Or maybe I need to reread.

Edit: Oh wait, it does. Silly me.

"close only counts in horseshoes and hand grenades ."

Oh god she forgot the bottle didn't she. That's what fell wasn't it!? If I had a nickel for the amount of times I left something out...

So do we have an ETA for the next chapter? I see on a blog post it is half done.

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I kinda forgot about ponies for a while - but the new chapter is up now! :P

An unexpected development, but I think that's how Applejack would reasonably react to such a revelation. Hope you won't make us wait too long for the next chapter. :ajsmug:

Thank you for writing more I just hope we don't have to wait as long for the next update.

The characters don't instantly accept a strange fetish being thrust upon them by a socially inept partaker? Blasphemy! How dare you write Applejack in-character instead of appealing to the desire of easy happy endings and kink payoff!

But seriously, looking forward to more. It's refreshing to see a story feature true emotional and interpersonal conflict that isn't simply resolved with a heart to heart.

I'm very impressed with this take on revealing an adult foal interest. This is a very rare scenario that I have barely seen in fics where someone does not show (or even consider) any interest at all in their partner's adult foal lifestyle. This definitely brings more tension and drama to the story, making me wonder what could possibly change AJ's mind.

Keep up the good work!

I gotta say, I hope you continue this. It's...well, I feel like it's somewhat realistic.

Not sure I like the idea of Applejack allowing herself to kiss Rainbow Dash while she's technically Twilight's marefriend (she hasn't broken up with her yet). I know part of it is the influence of the drinks, but still. :applejackunsure:

I'm betting Rarity's client is actually Twilight. After all, I can imagine Rarity would suspect something if she was getting orders for foal clothes big enough to fit a fully grown alicorn. :twilightsmile:

Lyra and Bonbon, Dash, ormaybe even Pinkie I'm guessing;though I can see Derpy too. Man I hate that this fetish is growing on me.

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Hmm... Alicorn-sized you say? Interesting :3c

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*chanting* one of us, one of us, one of us...

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Judging from that comment hopefully it's Luna we need more padded baby sister. She's far to cute and, I will likely be linched, so much cuter and fitting in them than her sister.

Oh dear god no. I still don't understand why like cute padded ponies so....

Especially given I hate badly written things and most, not really this one but most,make me want to drive a spike through my eyes.

By jove, he lives! Good to have you back.

Anyways, solid chapter. Going to have a little grumble about another story using alcohol instead of the canon-apprived salt licks for them to get inebriated (salt the rim of the glass for the closest approximation). No one ever uses salt and it makes me sad.

Still, enjoying the read thus far and the addition of another wrinkle in AJ's relationships, rather than the story solely focusing on her and Twilight, helps keep things fresh and interesting. I'm going to disagree with 8604504 and say you executed the scene rather well, with plenty of justification for her moment of indiscretion.

A couple of typos I noticed:

>a brave knight who could sweep his lady Rarty off her feet.

>Should she have done?

Also,
>Hey, maybe if I get better at looking after babies, Rarity will notice me!
Notice me, Sempai.

I'm also going to note the tonal inconsistency of Spike insisting he warm the bottle instead of Twilight using her magic for it, but then letting her magic a book from the library. Also, I'm a little disappointed he didn't warm up the bottle himself.

Overall, good chapter. And I'm going to guess the 'client' is Rarity herself. Hopefully we don't have to wait more than half a year to find out ;P

('Course, I'm not one to talk with my multi-year gap on The Night is Young, but I'm going to hold you to higher standards than myself)

Nice to see this updating again~

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Ggggg XD that first one my wife actually pointed out before. I must have forgotten to fix it. Workin' on it! XD thanks.

I was a little unsure about the Spike scene, and now I actually feel silly for having him not warm it with his FIRE because he's a F--king DRAGON XD Maybe a teeny re-write is in order at some point.

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Welcome ;)

As for Spike, my personal headcanon is that he's like one of those beanbags you warm up in the microwave, except he's always warm. If he held the bottle to his stomach for a few minutes it would end up nice and warm like that ;P

Gotta say, wasn't expecting those 2 of all the ponies I'd been thinking might be here. Glad to see Applejack is starting to understand, but bummed how everything with Rainbow seems to be going. Here's hoping there's happy endings all around, looking forward to more as it arrives.

I was certainly not expecting Big Macintosh, or Fluttershy for that matter. :eeyup:

YEEEEES! I was so happy to read this! Big Mac is my favorite, both as a pony and an adult foal. When I heard about Rarity's client, I thought that he would be perfect since he was AJ's brother. She knows him perfectly, and learning a whole new side of him would totally hemp clear her mind. Plus, I love FlutterMac, and Flutters is the perfect caretaker! :heart: Awesome chapter, and I hope we can see Red Melba again. :pinkiehappy:

I really like the steady progression AJ is taking with this instead of the 1,2,3, over it approach a lot of other stories do. Nice job.

Overall, solid chapter. I will admit that I was surprised at how many characters you decided to incorporate into the reveal, and the relationships required for them. I do feel it was a little excessive to use Big Mac and tie in a Fluttermac pairing without much in the way of foreshadowing, especially given how quickly Applejack accepts it after spending the last few chapters wrestling with her thoughts on Twilight. Not to mention that this is following a chapter where Applejack and Dash got drunk and kissed each other. You're throwing a lot into the Suspension of Disbelief machine at once; be careful not to jam it.

Still, I'm on board and I don't plan to get off, although I am a little wary about the ride getting choppy now . Keep it up, looking forward to more.

Hope there’s an update soon ^_^

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