• Member Since 26th Jun, 2015
  • offline last seen Aug 8th, 2020

Nightmare mare


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Everyday passes by. Every hour, minute, and second gone right before my eyes. I wish time would stop just for a moment, so I could relive the good old days.

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This was a good little story, but like you said a check up on your grammar was definitely needed to the point of necessity (I recommend getting an editor). Other than that, I believe you captured that raw emotion of Applejack moving on with her life while still reflecting upon her good times. To which, I say good job.

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