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Daring Do chases after the legendary Golden Muffin, a long-lost artifact from the days before the first Hearth's Warming Eve. A lone, cold earth pony was said to have transcribed the greatest of culinary secrets onto a giant golden muffin before succumbing to the freezing winds of the Wendigo.
This fanfiction is her story.
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"It was going to be the best fanfiction ever!" :/.
Eh, not as bad as Bitter thought it would become, not good or amazing. It wasn't funny, if that's what you were getting. I don't like that, goofy slapstick style. I don't know about grammar.
It didn't pull me in, make me immersed. It wasn't good enough. Sure there may be someone who will like it. Just release it, maybe add a side chapter with Rainbow reading the DD fanfiction and criticizing it's generic-ness.
Derpy, honey. You need to understand something about fanfiction.
This story is alright but Derpy, you need to understand, and I'm only saying this cause I care.
You didn't go far enough! There needed to be some explosions and that rope so should have been made out of snakes! Not nearly awesome enough, but good first try!
(In all seriousness, it did make me chuckle at the end.)
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I omitted the bit with the spiked walls slowly squeezing together and the spikes actually being made of marshmallow.
Would have been interesting though, with Daring Do going all 'Time. To. Nom.' and then chewing the hell out of the marshmallow spikes. But it was too random.
I appear to be the only one who knows that the phrase is actually "Derring-do." Seriously. Look it up.
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I rest my case.
839939 nnnope.
839957 eeyup.
AWESOME STORY!
839957 I didn't mean to imply that the show had it as "Derring-Do." I mean that the dictionary has it as "Derring-Do."
The actual dictionary; not Sweetie Belle.
839999 Indeed. But that's what her name is in the show. It'd be pretty stupid for me to put it as Derring Do
840002 Agreed.
You know, I thought this was going to end up being a collaboration between Derpy, Rainbow Dash, and Twilight; it alternates between these detailed, almost poetic descriptions of the environment, badassery and awesomeness, and muffins.
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Well who says Derpy can't write detailed stuff? Just the random muffins seems to be something she'd do
It wasn't that funny, although it made me smile! *smiles* Interesting writing style, quite refreshing, although a little too good for Derpy to be writing.
I knew there would be a pony writing it, from 'she was just that hardcore' but I thought it would be Rainbow Dash writing it, not Derpy. Well done, I really enjoyed reading the story!
Derpy is best author.
They are related or Derpy, also known as Ditsy Do(can Hasbro get anything right?) Is the author of the Daring do books.
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...........Brilliant. Absolute. Brilliant.
843160 Quite good, quite good...
derpy is hardcore badassery
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I have read worse, and, I am sad to say, in my younger years, I've also written worse. (Oh my GOSH is Sucked at writing when I was younger!)
But I agree. This was the kind of fic you have to force yourself to read. But at least Derpy's spelling is good, as is her grammar.