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Princess Erroria is walking home with her Slowpoke when an overturn fruit basket catches their eyes. When they go to inspect it, they find a rather strange creature that Erroria is determined to have as a friend, even if that means kidnapping.
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It's decent, and there are no glaring grammatical errors that I can see, but I feel this would work better as a true Pokemon story rather than an MLP crossover. The only thing that really screams ponies at me was the mention of Canterlot. Still, nice story. I encourage you to keep writing.
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7763840 No problem. Keep being awesome my friend.
Yay more Princess Erroria work!
7764044 I'm glad you enjoy them
Very nice! Long live the princess!
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