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Just your daily geek

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Fortissimo, son of the famous pianist Frederick Horseshoepin and cellist Octavia, is on his way to gain fame in Equestria. But what's bothering him is a physical mark left on him, which has made him having a unique view on how a pony's generosity has allowed him to live, and make himself fame.

Based on a true story involving a heart transplant between two babies born in 2007.

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I..Liked it but..
No offense, but I think that it progressed to quickly for the plot and was a bit too blunt for what it was.
One thing that sorta bothered me was that it took twelve years for him to find out about his condition, but all in all, I think that your writing is good in some areas, but needs some practice in others. I give it a solid 7 out of 10 for this story! :scootangel:

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