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Mochas Dungeon


My darker (fun) side resides here.

Comments ( 31 )

fallout or fall of equestria?

Pretty good story! Keep it up!

I actually enjoyed this story. As someone who is currently working on an FoE story based around the life of raiders, I've been having trouble looking to other people's stories for inspiration, so I thank you for that. :twilightsmile:

A few grammatical errors. Might be a good idea to reread chapters, probably multiple times, before posting them and correct any grammatical mistakes.

Keep up the good work! I hope to see more in the future.

7742800
Seems to be Fallout: Equestria. But yeah, it got me confused as well.

I always knew that's how you do it.

Gotta love that Wasteland Class
Just walk in there deck toughest t:yay:t there and piss on 'em.

7743176 Yup, Fallout Equestria.

Yes.

No.

Yes.

No...

Should I read it?

Should I not?

Choices, choices.

7743963
Track it and come back to it next chapter?

I'm looking forward to reading this, but I've gotta point this out: you need a better description.

7754111
Seriously, I'm open to assistance.
I suck at descriptions on my stories.
:fluttercry:

color me impresed:rainbowderp: , i didn t expect a good story :rainbowkiss:

keep it up i´m realy interested in your vision of rayders and y hope we see all te diferent flavors of crazy they come, like hoofington canibals :rainbowwild:

also if the story takes enuf fligth i may translate it into my mother language,:yay: CHILEAN

I have to say this... wow... xD
THis is quite the story you have going!
I hope to see more of it soon

7772808 Thanks!
Going into this I had no inspiration for a raider pov, so I have to make it up as I go on.

It's just as much an adventure to me as it is you sometimes.

:twilightsheepish:
Here's to a great raider story.
Spread the love!

This story still going?

8092804
Yeah, next chapter is 70%.
Stalled because life.
:ajsmug:

Glad to have this back. I look forward to see this new format you have stated.

8350340
Won't be much of a change, to be honest, but my style has shifted in the story telling area, so you may notice more than I will. Just, read on. :)

Thanks for the comment.

Wait, when did she tell them to kill the town? Was it during her blackout? Anyway, I love the fact that this from a raider perspective. Keep up the good work.

8371342

She didn't! That's the thing. They thought she was giving them 'subtle cues' but she was just being honest and didn't want to hurt anypony.

The raider mentality goes deep!

Sheesh that's brutal. I'm getting the sense that the hammer head raiders may have found specific targets, the rich!

Wow...... just wow, I've read a few fallout equestria stories and this one is truly...... unique.... and dark though shouldn't be surprised as it is a raider's pov.... I like it, always kind of wanted to see a pov from a raider so I'm looking forward to reading the rest. :twilightsmile:

8664816
I'm actually revising it a bit before I post more chapters because I've had inspiration and also want to add details here and there.

But thanks!
I'll be working on this soon.
💪

Так жаль что прекрасный проект прекратился.
Может быть он оживет когда-нибудь?

It's such a shame that the beautiful project has ended.
Maybe he will come to life someday?

10649556
I'm planning a new story, but this one just lost my inspiration. I lost my muse irl and just couldn't get into the story like so many others.
The next one I'll be releasing, fallout related, will be different, but just as exciting in its own way.

I'm surprised to see this story back. I enjoyed the more awful raider approach this story offered. Keep up the good work.

11562916
Thanks, I apparently had this mostly done a couple years ago but didn't post it because I was waiting for an editor.
No more waiting. Lol
Thanks for the comment!

Very Glad to see this back. Honestly It read fine no need for an editor I saw. Hope theirs more in that twisted mind of yours.

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