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Easy breezey


"We all have to face our inner demons one day, someday,one way or another." -Easy Breezey.

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Not bad for a first story. It felt kinda rushed but overall not bad.

Also seams you made a time paradox :derpytongue2:

Don't worry I'll go fix it. :pinkiecrazy:

so many EMOJIS!!

Also suprisingly good. The expectations bar was like an inch off the ground and you pole-vaulted over it. ::pinkiesmile:

You have only up to go from here.

7792195 I'm actually planing on a sequal:raritywink:

Do you guys want a sequal?:pinkiehappy:

7793643

YASSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

7791852 and how did I make that tine paradox?:rainbowhuh:

Comment posted by Atlantis Productions deleted Dec 14th, 2016

7793857 No wait my OTP IS SOARINDASH!!!!!:twilightangry2: This is not a hate fic ok just.... I wan't to try and do a story and suddenly this idea poped in my mind ming you this is myMOM AND MYSELF I'M KILLNG HERE!!:facehoof: It kindda hurts when I wrote this I was laughing at myself for writing this shit!:pinkiecrazy: the main plot of the story is dash commiting suicide it's THE POINT of the story:facehoof:

7793966 Sorry, I misread that. My bad.:twilightblush: I understand if you want to scream at me, go ahead. My mistake.

7793991 It's ok people makes mistakes cuz nobody's perfect and right but did you read the author's note or the discription?

7793659 If you and your mom died before you were even born....how did you right the story? You made a paradox.

And yeah Id be up for a sequel

7794085 LOL THAT'S THE JK!!:rainbowlaugh: besides it's like a EB's POV kindda thing :applejackunsure:

It was so sad! I loved this story! It was amazing!:pinkiehappy:

OMG!!! ONLY 8 LIKES AND 35 TUMBS DOWN!!!! WHAT?!:pinkiegasp: ouch that hurts..:applecry: I didn't think it was THAT bad:rainbowhuh: who ever tumbs down pls. tell me why so I may improve next time:pinkiehappy: your doing me a favor by doing this :twilightblush:

7802532 wow that makes me soo much better:ajbemused:

7802551
I liked it so it's 9. And I don't know why there are 35 dumbs down.

7802588 Ok...:applejackunsure: I don't give a sh:yay::yay: anyway:scootangel:

7804565 I will check the Death prayer:raritywink:

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Hmm... It could use some touch ups, and make the story even more sad:pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Sour_Spot deleted Dec 28th, 2016

7825199 welp long story short dash commited suside and the readers (u) found out that she died pregnant

The Song That Needs To Be In The Background Should Be "Save Yourself" By My Darkest Days

7828656 oh really? Would you kindly send it to me here so I may liten to it?

7833998 it worked and I listened to it and DAMN that was deep I loved it ty for showing me this:pinkiehappy:

Hurt
Johnny Cash
Lyrics
I hurt myself today
To see if I still feel
I focus on the pain
The only thing that's real
The needle tears a hole
The old familiar sting
Try to kill it all away
But I remember everything
What have I become
My sweetest friend
Everyone I know goes away
In the end
And you could have it all
My empire of dirt
I will let you down
I will make you hurt
I wear this crown of thorns
Upon my liar's chair
Full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair
Beneath the stains of time
The feelings disappear
You are someone else
I am still right here
What have I become
My sweetest friend
Everyone I know goes away
In the end
And you could have it all
My empire of dirt
I will let you down
I will make you hurt
If I could start again
A million miles away
I would keep myself
I would find a way

I saw the tear-jerking trailer for Logan and thought back to this...

This could use lots of work with paragraphs, and I looked and saw it was the only story you had so far. It's a cool story. [Did I just say that about a fanfic like this? Eh. :moustache:] As I said, it could use work, but good nonetheless. Nice ending, for something like this. :)

7907021 Oh really thank you for taking time to read it and put it in your fave:pinkiehappy:

You're welcome. :) I think the ending was cool yet sad. I can't wait to read more from you! :pinkiehappy:

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