Getting Accepted to the Canterlot University is a huge thing, a very huge thing, and Bumble Hooves has every intention of making it big. Of course, though, something he's carrying that is just as huge may be the key to helping him out.
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that was a twist.
I have a few questions and comments
Will there be a long and graphic sex scene with the herd? Because that would be great with most of them being submissive to see Bumble be more dominant, but only in the bedroom or maybe in a more open place, like the train. But that is me.
Isnt Bumble a college student? Shouldnt he be in class instead of traveling everywhere? Is he on summer vacation or something?
I hope Bumble gets pissed at Doyde for the drawings and punches him, fuck that guy for drawing them without consent.
Keep going! I like it but would prefer longer chapters with more detail, taking your time, and more descriptive and extended sex scenes. I like the way you write them! Just wish there was more
I'm pretty cool that Bumble now has a Siren as part of his herd. But I have to wonder if there could be a bit better description of the newest sisterwife than in there already. At first glance, I was thinking that this Siren was actually Sonata, especially with the how she first spoke, as well as how she relayed that her sisters pretty much abandoned her. Then I realized that she's blind, so this Siren is an original character, and I'm pretty sure that this is happening at least a decade after the Sirens in the EQG universe. In addition, I think that you need to come up with a nickname for the new girl. Not to offend you, but 'Bagatelle Addolorato' is a mouthful, like some of the newest mares of the herd. You made a nickname for Pavi, so I think the same needs to be done for the Siren.
7945012 bagel?
At first, I thought it was Sonata being added to the herd. This story is coming to a close? *sigh* I guess all things must come to an end at some point. BTW, how is Pavi taking the fact that all her herdmates are pregnant except her and the one just added?
7950478 Just give her and her stallion some time. With all the creampies that Bumble's been serving, it just takes the right circumstances for them. And I'm pretty sure that Baggie would be appreciated as well.
Nice to see that I wasn't the only one that thought when it was first shown a Siren was gonna be in the herd, it was gonna be Sonata. Have to admit, it would be nice to see her with ponies that actually appreciate her. No offense to Addagio and Aria, but those two were straight up bitches, especially to their fellow sister.
You know what, if they actually have the Sirens return, I would love for Sonata to come back. She really grew on me
7952914 Pavi has to get that final potion first and she insists on not having help getting it.