After everything she'd done Anon-a-miss was enough to destroy what she'd worked for. Sunset decides that she's had enough and tries to end it but when someone offers her the chance to do something great she figures she's got nothing to lose and leaves. She returns at the end of the Friendship games and revealed her choice.
Well...i find this story intresting and love to see what happen afer Sunset left, I take it the real culprits revealed themsevles too late.
I don't see Sunset forgiving her exfriends or the little sisters and hope she points out they forgave thier little sisters so easily if it like it was inthe comic.
but turned thier backs on Sunset so easily and broke her heart, even as she wept puddles of tears.
but i do hope she befriends Sci Twi and the shadow bolts.
7732563 Thanks. What did you think of Sunset's change?
Ok, this should be very interesting will be keeping a very watchful careful eye on this work of art.
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I like it, she still Susnet but very different, looks like she found herself, and found a new family.
Her warning Rainbow, shows she doesn't want to hurt them still but at the the same time.
She showing she doesn't want to give them a second chance, and how thin the ice is between them.
Wonder how Sci Twi and the Shadow Bolts will react when they find out, also look forward to see what happen to the CMC.
Suspended for a month or two, least they get torn apart by the students.
I have but one request for the CMC:
HIT THEM, BREAK THEM, THROW THEM IN THE POOL. I WANNA SEE SOME RED, HOT BLOOD! That's all. Thanks for your time!
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7732817 You're mostly right but there's one thing you're off on. Sunset does want to hurt them. That's why she warned Rainbow. The only reason she chose not to break Rainbow in that moment was because she felt it wasn't worth the effort
7733586 um....*sweatdrops* I'll see what I can do but as you can imagine there won't be much of the Crusaders on account of the story focusing on Sunset's current mission and the allies she gains and those who stop by as well as those who will later appear.
Interesting concept, but is this going to be another massive mash up like An Avenger Returns? The set up is good, the writing is ok (pacing is a bit off and the fight scene was a bit of a mess, but no glaring errors either), and I haven't seen this concept done before, but so much of An Avenger Returns was either jamming in a million references (a lot of which were very awkward as the universes didn't really feel compatible and a lot of characters didn't feel like they should be there), trying to catch up on Twilight's powers, and throwing around pieces of her past without really telling a story. It became a chore to keep track of everything, and a very good chunk of the references felt like they were just there for the sake of it, meaning a large part of the story felt like cut away gags instead of part of the story. I'm really curious where this will go, especially with the Shadowbolts, and how Sunset and Twilight will interact with everyone.
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On the CMC I do hope their fate is explained a little or will there be side stories to handle stuff like that?
7734581 There will be an explaination as well as them seeing what thier actions did to Sunset. Slight spoiler at one point there will be a fight where Sunset...let's out some of her anger.
7734631 Oh Dear..... Well they have it coming.
Look forward to the updates.
7734825 And just to be a dick I'm making the Crusaders watch
7734581 I just hope it isn't another slap on the wrist or just detention...I;m hoping for something big.
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there this one where theyw ere given over two months supsenation or more, can't remember.
But ti was enough they have to repeat the year...Yeesh!
that not going to be fun but then again with what happened...
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/267987/h2o-just-add-friendship
I admit, I'm hoping that the rest of the school has to deal with what they have done to Sunset. Cause let's face facts here, shall we? Rainbow was only like that because the truth about Anon-A-Miss was out (either by the CMC confessing or getting busted). If that wasn't the case, Canterlot High would have been ordering Sunset to leave, with Rainbow at the front of that angry crowd. All the while, Crystal Prep just watching, possibly appalled by how they were treating her.
7735206 I've read that, it was good, shame its not updating.
An Anon-a-Miss fic with Kamen Rider thrown into the mix.. Let's see how this is goes
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7735678 Had that happened Sunset wouldn't have been passive about. Sunset warning Rainbow was her trying to keep herself from killing.
7737468 Thanks for giving me a chance.
7738983 What?
7739542 anymore chapters coming?
whats going to happen next
7739546 Oh yeah. I'm part ways into the next one.
7739548 It'll be interesting. Here's a little clue. There's a reason chapter 1 ended the way it did
7739555 cool
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Oh I see. Rainbow should be grateful the CMC were exposed. And to be honest, I kinda hope she never forgives them. They simply go along with the simplest solution, even if it meant abandoning someone, never really trusted her, and care more about their prides then friendship.
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So Sunset is both a Kamen Rider and a Pretty Cure, how's that even work? I mean, isn't it a little messed up?
7789959 She's technically a Kamen Rider with the ability to use the power of the Pretty Cure. Think Kamen Rider Ghost only instead of using the power of historical figures she uses Pretty Cure who's data gets placed in modules somewhat similar to Ex-Aid, at least if you saw episode 9. There will be an explaination about how that happened later on.
So, like Hollowgasts from Miss Peregrine's home for peculiar children?
7790512 The what from what? They're from this:
http://kamenrider.wikia.com/wiki/Category:Gamma
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... These are Hollowgasts
7792752 Cthulhu's cousins?
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Uhm, I guess?
7795161 I'm gonna level with you man. I never even heard of that series till the movie and I haven't seen it
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Ah. its fine. I understand now.
Really love this story but the site didn't let me know it was updated.
Great chapter, and love how the conqunces are playing out, I really want the Rainbooms to know how badly they screwed up, and the students of the school not just the CMC.
Hope it's pointed out they were hating a person who they hought was posting thier secrets when it was THEM that sent them to the site in the first place except for the Rainbooms.
How else did the True Cuprits were able to gain such info and secrets, they hacked Sunset's phone, everything else was sent by the Students of CMC.
7844769 Thanks. Still haven't figured out what to do in regards to the school though. I will have somethig happen with the Humane 5
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Already guessing the lost of Sunset has ruined thier ability to play in thier band, Seems they are very off on playing together.
Can't wait to see what happens.
Not the best story I've ever seen, obviously. Its decent enough, not bad grammar. However, a lot of this is mildly confusing and a tad convoluted. Is there any specific reason that Sunlight has a Driver, why are there other Kamen Riders here? In fact why do they exist in EQG? Its a good enough read, but I'm not all that enthralled.
7858067 Thank you for your honesty
Will characters from Kamen Rider and Pretty Cure appear in this story, or will it just be Sunset?
7909923 There's gonna be some but there's mostly gonna be people from that reality becoming known Riders.
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Good day sir. May I ask when the next chapter will be up?
7931832 It's still gonna take time. My progress has slowed down because three of the keys on my laptop stopped working so I have to paste six characters as I type and then delete the extra letters which is throwing off my writing rhythm. I'm getting used to it but I did get a new keyboard on ebay so I might be able to pick up the pace.
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Woah....
Hope it comes out soon. I wanna see Sunset's team
7948737 Thanks for the comment and the initial team will be revealed bit by bit
Yis! New chapter!
7949874 Hope you like it
What happen between the Shadowbolts and The Rainbooms was like the Ferengi having moral superiority over the Federation, and I love it.
7953481 I have no idea what that means but thanks