Twilight learns that her grandparents had pasted away and they had left her their mansion that has been in their family for centuries, by her grandparents' wishes she stays there for a week before deciding to keep it or not. As she stays her believe in the paranormal is tested and a secret in her family that has been keep for centuries is being revealed slowy night after night.
I'm going to tell you that in your description "pasted" is not a word. I think you mean "passed".
Im starting to like this But the many, many spelling errors ruin it.
BUt you still deserve a fav
Well that was interesting, not half bad but the spelling and grammar issues were very distracting...
I will give it a thumbs up for a good story but the technical stuff needs a ton of work.