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Jongoji245


A fellow Brony, Bluthy (Don Bluth Fan), Dinosaur lover, G-Fan, and an animation student. I worked on fan fiction in Deviantart, and would like to submit them, revised, to you.

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After two years of magic related phenomena, the former students of Canterlot High have since gone to college. And sad to say, Flash isn't that much a lady's man as he was. Sci-Twi already has interests on another student, and it's not likely that the Princess of Friendship will enter his world just to visit him in college for a short while.

In that regard, Flash hopes to rekindle an old flame... If she's so willing to forgive him.


Special Thanks to huntersunday, Candy Candies, Eclipse Monsoon, Chrome Masquerade, Bringiton6611, and Equine Editor for pre-reading and editing. Go check them out when you have the chance.:twilightsmile:

Told in first person through Flash' perspective and has several hints of the Jongojiverse, and foreshadows what I'll be doing in the future for the now hiatus story, "Vacant Niches." It's not required to read them, but I do allow a curious mind.

Rated Teen for Language.

Cover Art changed to work by your's truly

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 11 )

Wait what? I think you confused my Lyra and Candy as the same person :rainbowderp:

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Oh, :twilightoops:, I thought that you two were one and the same because you have the same avatar. I'll correct that.

Hmm... Normally I don't bother with stories told from Flash's perspective. But this does have Sunset in it, and I love stories that involve best human...

Commence read!

-2/10 not enough snow
Hm, kinda nice! It doesn't strike me as anything grand, but I enjoyed it for the small moments it as able to convey. I also totally pictured this as a radio play/motion comic, just sayin'. Still spotted a couple minor errors in the writing, but nothing that was too distracting.

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Glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

This is the first fic I have with multiple pre-readers and one editor; the suggestions were pretty substantial, but I'm glad I took my time.

Short and sweet. Nice:pinkiehappy:

Also, appreciated the Die Hard reference. Best Christmas movie ever

Djjmatrix99 got a name change

Vinyl gives me a thumbs up, then puts on her headset and hoodie as she walks away, bopping her head.

Vinyl don't give a f***!!!

My face grimaces at my next choice. It’s clearly not a Christmas movie, though it is set during Christmas. It’s a good action movie with Alan Rickman, but having lived through several film worthy events, I have to decline and so change the channel again.
“Do you want to build a snowman?” Sings an animated girl.

References!!!

Huh, looks like I have already commented.

But now for Single Writers.

This story was very... interesting... to say the least.

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Glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

What?! Like what the fuck is going on in Canterlot?! Three way gang war, Cosgrove, the Rianbooms and CMC fighting in said gang wars..... CONTEXT PLEASE!

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