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Jongoji245


A fellow Brony, Bluthy (Don Bluth Fan), Dinosaur lover, G-Fan, and an animation student. I worked on fan fiction in Deviantart, and would like to submit them, revised, to you.

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After two years of magic related phenomena, the former students of Canterlot High have since gone to college. And sad to say, Flash isn't that much a lady's man as he was. Sci-Twi already has interests on another student, and it's not likely that the Princess of Friendship will enter his world just to visit him in college for a short while.

In that regard, Flash hopes to rekindle an old flame... If she's so willing to forgive him.


Special Thanks to huntersunday, Candy Candies, Eclipse Monsoon, Chrome Masquerade, Bringiton6611, and Equine Editor for pre-reading and editing. Go check them out when you have the chance.:twilightsmile:

Told in first person through Flash' perspective and has several hints of the Jongojiverse, and foreshadows what I'll be doing in the future for the now hiatus story, "Vacant Niches." It's not required to read them, but I do allow a curious mind.

Rated Teen for Language.

Cover Art changed to work by your's truly

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 16 )

Wait what? I think you confused my Lyra and Candy as the same person :rainbowderp:

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Oh, :twilightoops:, I thought that you two were one and the same because you have the same avatar. I'll correct that.

Hmm... Normally I don't bother with stories told from Flash's perspective. But this does have Sunset in it, and I love stories that involve best human...

Commence read!

-2/10 not enough snow
Hm, kinda nice! It doesn't strike me as anything grand, but I enjoyed it for the small moments it as able to convey. I also totally pictured this as a radio play/motion comic, just sayin'. Still spotted a couple minor errors in the writing, but nothing that was too distracting.

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Glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

This is the first fic I have with multiple pre-readers and one editor; the suggestions were pretty substantial, but I'm glad I took my time.

Short and sweet. Nice:pinkiehappy:

Also, appreciated the Die Hard reference. Best Christmas movie ever

Djjmatrix99 got a name change

Vinyl gives me a thumbs up, then puts on her headset and hoodie as she walks away, bopping her head.

Vinyl don't give a f***!!!

My face grimaces at my next choice. It’s clearly not a Christmas movie, though it is set during Christmas. It’s a good action movie with Alan Rickman, but having lived through several film worthy events, I have to decline and so change the channel again.
“Do you want to build a snowman?” Sings an animated girl.

References!!!

Huh, looks like I have already commented.

But now for Single Writers.

This story was very... interesting... to say the least.

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Glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

What?! Like what the fuck is going on in Canterlot?! Three way gang war, Cosgrove, the Rianbooms and CMC fighting in said gang wars..... CONTEXT PLEASE!

Not bad, but too au for my taste.

My face grimaces at my next choice. It’s clearly not a Christmas movie, though it is set during Christmas. It’s a good action movie with Alan Rickman, but having lived through several film worthy events, I have to decline and so change the channel again.

Alan Rickman was a Legend

Working at a mall does have benefits. Not much to clean, not much to shelve. After vacuuming, I put the cleaner away, lock the closet, and stand outside. Vinyl joins me soon, grabbing the fence and pulling it down. I lock the gate for now. One bright side about Christmas Day: shopping centers are closed… Can’t say the same for restaurants.

Yep, since some are open on Christmas :ajsleepy:

“Do you want to build a snowman?” Sings an animated girl.

God no the flashbacks!!!!!!! :fluttershbad:

“Traffic isn’t great…” She answers with uncertainty. I imagine Sunset looking out her window. It’s no secret that her adoptive mother, Night Dancer, was killed in a car accident during a snowstorm. If anything goes wrong, everyone will have piece of me.

How sad. :fluttercry:

“I’m surprised none of us are going south for the winter,” I add; Sunset looks at me with a cute smirk before she opens the door. I open the door and follow her through the trees. No one comes to Turtle Park during winter. At least, that’s what I think. Whatever this winter brought so far, it did a good deal to the statues; the snapping turtle’s shell is covered with ice and gave it a nice shine in the moonlight.

Lol 😂

My lips curl up into a smile. Guess that’s something I haven’t noticed recently. I shake my thermos a little before taking another sip. I notice Sunset drinking as well. At first, I don’t mind it, but when she stops at the same time, I figured, ‘she’s playing a little game.’ I chuckle under my own breath, shaking the thermos a little, then raise it up and chug the hot coffee. Bad move, and both of us caught a little bit of the stuff in the wrong tube and started coughing like mad.

Oofity 😬

While still looking at plaza, I reach for her hand. Figuring it would be too soon, I stop. I reach for my pocket when I feel something warm wrap around my hand. I look down and find that a hand wrapped around mine, then look up her arm and see Sunset looking down as well, looking at me with a smile that made my heart melt. We come to a huddle, wrapping our arms around each other.

Looks likes they're friends again. I'm so happy for them. :twilightsmile:

Wait, who the hay is Comet Tail? What happened to Timber?

When I came back to the bed, I changed the channel; it’s one of the bad episodes of Spongebob. Still, better than listening to the same news for several days straight. I take a sip of tea before wrapping myself with the blanket again. It’s only a few hours away before Christmas Eve, just a good night’s sleep would do the trick then it’s a two way trip to my parents and little bro.

“Do you want to build a snowman?” Sings an animated girl.

You really got me 😭

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