Fluttershy didn't expect much when she went to the picnic. Just a normal picnic with her friends. She didn't expect an unknown creature to come out of the forest wanting help. She decided to take him in and look after him.
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Oh YAY!! its been a while since I had seen a new Fluttershy x Human that seemed worth reading! kudos!
Shouldnt there be a human tag?
i'll keep my eye on this... i haven't ee much fluttershyXhuman
This seems very interesting keep up the good work
7724954 I have a human x fluttershy fix on my profile.
Why is this rated M?
7724803 ... Yes, yes there should. Given that the only category tags are Adventure and Romance it should probably also have a Sex tag. Neither of those categories really lend themselves to the other ways to gain a Mature rating. Well, except maybe Adventure... that could invoke a Gore... but that degree of adventure would really clash with both the short and long descriptions.
7725132 For... future chapters? Stories are supposed to be rated on their entirety from the moment of submission... posting a story with a rating below what you plan to write and then changing it when the relevant chapter is released is extremely bad form.
This seems great so far.
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Thanks for letting me know. I've made the necessary changes.
I'm honestly supprised that there aren't many Fluttershy x human fics. But anyway, thanks for all the support! I'll try to update soon.
It is cool so far, i just think it was weird when Twilight grab Jake with her magic and push him closer to them then saying that she was afraid he was going too hurt her or her friends. Who does that? Who says " ho look that person look dangerous, lets get close to him" XD. But I am just nitpicking lets see where this story go
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Twilights magic restricts movement, just FYI.
Hmm. There's something about this story that seems familiar.....probably just my imagination. I'm looking forward to read more
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Very funny!
I just realized, the plane scene reminds me a lot of the plane scene from the movie. 'Day Z'. Minus the zombies of course.
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Shhhhhhhhhh, we don't speak of that abomination
7727042 But you see it too, don't you? Tell me you don't see it.
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I never actually watched the movie, so any similarities are purely coincidental.
Also does anyone know how to do the MLP emojis? I know it's a noob thing not to know but I've never done them before.
Thanks
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Just above the text box are a load of tools (such as bold or italic) 2nd row far right is the one with the emoji's
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Thanks
7728298 above the comment box, to the very far right, there is a smiley face. Click it and it shows you all the faces you cab do.
Seems good! Though describe more about the situation other than going straight to the point.
This story makes me happy... except for the death, that makes me sad
yeeeaaa okay...that's a new one.
Twilight is coming off as the odd one alredy, but I don't think that has to be bad.
As always I would like if he has something special, even if it should only be him coocking better than most other cooks, or him having a chance to be the best at something, since he probably isn't going to learn magic. (at least if this story is focused on adventures.
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I agree with that.
Make a chapter about "Fluttershy's Chest Poof/Fluff" It'll be freaking hilarious
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If you want me to, I can try.
I need a new chapter
I NEEDZ IT 
R U gonna continue this?
8026386 I will. I'm just trying to write another story AND edit a story for someone else. Both of which are taking a lot longer than I expected.
Sorry. I hope to have my new story up within the next month or two. I hope that you understand. 
Can we get 1000 views on this story? It would really make my day.
I'll try to get the next chapter out as soon as I can, so keep an eye on the feed!
could use some refining and double checks, but otherwise, I think the idea is good.
I AM DONE WAITING, BYE FELICIA
PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEEEE
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then your luck
I'm going to assume... yes. Yes he will. Because that is what happens when a human winds up in Ponyville unexpectedly, double-especially if near the Everfree. I solved the puzzle, guys!
Out of curiosity, what are the headcanon sizes for pony within this fic?
Here are a few (potential) errors I found.
hopping
I believe a comma is missing.
The closing quotation mark is missing?
So she can casually rifle through his entire life because why?
awww she is lavender and not yellow, dangerous
I know he was in pain, but I still found his reaction pretty odd.
Well despite that one moment I think this was nice, maybe a bit short but I'm just used to something different and didn't wanted a long read right now anyway.
Not sure if I just believe that I would act differently, but when he thought the ponies could talk and help him, then why did he thought they wanted to help him, wait till he wakes up and then eat him?
I had, maybe it makes more sense for someone else, I guess it isn'T exactly a wrong thing.
That is the only
I just noticed instead of reading the new chapter I had read the first one, maybe I missed while clicking on it, well it's still my opinion.
This is the first time I really ask it myself, but isn't it a bit strange of Rainbow to I don't know, try to attack him unprovoked when they all wanted to help him?, as far as I noticed she didn't even noticed him do anything and just went straight upwards with no one of her friends being attacked and tackled him.
Why little one? Is this one of those "Ponies are so big that their head is as high as mine stories?
Well I can't have the same luck with every human main char, I just image while still being confused I wouldn't just bow to everyone, he could still be friendly but it doesn'T seems necessary.
I'm not that annoyed, but Luna is on my blacklist for now, doing that mind stuff makes me wanting that they learn their lession. For some human main chars I would like if they fight a bit for their privacy.
Sometimes I just in the mood to ask questions like that, but with Luna there I only remember all that stories which had Luna treatening or forcing the human to stuff trough their dreams or absolutely not respecting it when someone doesn't wants her in their dreams, since then I dislike it a bit.
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Smartass.... that's brilliant
Please continue
Wow, i did not expect to see an update, but i am glad you decided to continue this story
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Because magic!
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All fixed. Thanks for letting me know
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And what about the question?
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I'm not really sure how to explain it. They have smaller heads than in the show because it would look kind of weird in somewhat real life. Plus the fact that I prefer the more "streamlined" design that a lot of artists use.
Not sure if I explained everything enough because I don't usually write or reply to comments. It's just something that I'll hopefully get better at with time
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Okay, so somewhat different proportions.
Perhaps I was a bit unclear. I was referring to their heights. Sorry for being kind of vague on that.
off to a great start can't wait to see what happens next