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Solar Caesar


[HARMONIC SUPPORTER DETECTED ON HIVE SOIL. LETHAL FORCE AUTHORIZED.]

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After Chrysalis's final attack, she vowed with utter hatred in her eyes to seek revenge for snatching her royal rank away from her. King Thorax and his Princess allies prepared to defend against the former Queen.

But nothing happened. They waited, eventually easing upon their security, however still alert on the possibility that she was still alive.

But one day, King Thorax receives a report on the Griffon Kingdoms. After approaching a griffon outpost, to collect Intel, a changeling scout began to take sniper fire.

After carefully crawling away and gaining a visual on the enemy sniper, the scout expected to see a griffon sniper. But upon taking a closer look, the changeling was stunned to see not a griffon - but an un-reformed changeling.

The scout took a picture of the snipers face, and then returned home for a report.

The scout was terrified to see the changelings face.

Chrysalis.

(Writing a new story after a long hiatus away from FiMfiction. I had this idea after playing MGSV a lot recently. I hope you guys enjoy!)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 36 )

Damn I want another my readers stomach demands more!!

This has my interest. I await patiently for more.

7717171 You will get more, my friend. Glad you're enjoying it so far!

7716544 I'll hopefully write some more tomorrow. Patience, young Jedi :moustache:

I look forward to seeing where this goes

7717260 Glad to have peaked your interest, Sir Rutherford!

Ah, the hive of backstabbers and traitors, who turn on their mother without a moment's hesitation. Too bad she missed the scout, the fewer of these abominations alive, the better.

Tiny mistake: zebra's should be zebras.

7718102 You sound like Chrysalis if she was commenting on this :rainbowlaugh:
Thanks for the feedback on spelling.

7717246and are the griffons going to be weapon wise the Russians because I want to see a dragnov

7721257 The griffons will kind of be like the Russians, but I'll most likely use a Reznov Sniper rifle. The Reznov is a Russian made firearm.

YAY more chapters, i like her last name i would like to see he be one of the GAF (Griffonian armed forces) operatives interesting at least

7721468 Reno not a actual gun, its a moisn grant, and if they have assault rifles then i would expect more than world war 2 weaponry.

Good luck with that, I don't think she'll come willingly. Not too traitors, at least.

This'll be interesting to see. Especially griffons telling Celestia to eff off.

7718482 What can I say, I feel for the best bughorse. And the reformed changelings disgust me, especially that, aside of Thorax, they did nothing to earn it, up until the transformation they were acting evil and enjoying it.

7724991 I think the Reznov was supplied to Russians in the Soviet-Afghan war, but I can't be too sure(The Soviet Afghan war being in the mid 1980's)

7725127 Hah, I like the way you think! You can bet the griffon king has a surprise for them...

Next time they arrive she won't miss. :pinkiecrazy:

Zebra's are arseholes.

I like the chapter but Russia is my thing you need some factual support ask me and make more chapters at once.

7735235 Alright, thanks. And there will be more chapters

Looking foward for more of this.

Since Chrysalis is going to be an expy of Quiet, how similar is Chrysalis going to be to Quiet?

7766963 I never intended Chrysalis to be Quiet, actually. This isn't an MGSV crossover, I'm just gonna be using some of the terms from MGSV. Such as the conversations between soldiers and CP.

The only way that Chrysalis is similar to Quiet is that they're both snipers. Chrysalis speaks; unlike Quiet. Chrysalis will be similar to a soviet sniper, if you've come across any in the game.

I'm glad you're interested in my story!

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It will, I've just taken a slight break. I'm working on a one-shot at the moment, so once that is finished, I'll probably be returning to this story.

A true deadliest weapon.

Just shoot at them or bring a tank.

7724991
Mosin Nagant. See StG 44

Thorax, at first, dismissed the idea completely. Chrysalis enlisting in the griffon military? That's insane. Every kingdom knew about Chrysalis's many wrong doings. There would be no way that the griffon king would permit her to enlist.

Yes they know. But what if they're like me and take her side. If my family was starving and the last time me and the princess met was when she put me in a volcano I'd do worse than any of these villains could think of.

"My god..." Shining muttered. "We've found her. After two years, we've finally found her."

Touch her and I'll kill your kid and rape your wife. Actually I hate sex so I'll kill her too.

"Ain't that the truth."

This is why I aim to kill. If only Changelings were lethal. why couldn't they be like Diamond dogs? They don't have an issue with killing. Then again...

stop, Chrysalis is only 34 years old? I thought she was at least over 100 years old.

I would like to say that in the army of Russia and the CIS countries between the ranks of "рядовой" (private) and "младший сержант" (junior sergeant) there is the rank of "ефрейтор" (corporal) . Formally, this rank is no different from a private, but the charter says "ефрейтор" - the best soldier.

By the way, if I understood correctly, the red beret that the griffin officer wore with pride is the "краповый берет" (maroon beret). In the service, he does not give those who deserve it to wear any titles or privileges, but the right to wear it is considered very honorable. A military man of any rank can earn the right to wear it, but not everyone can do it.
usually those who have achieved the right to wear it are considered the most elite soldiers.
The maroon beret is awarded as a result of challenging qualification tests and is a matter of exceptional pride.

The qualification tests for the right to wear the maroon beret are allowed for contract servicemen and conscripts (who have served in special forces for at least a year) and who have shown solid knowledge and skills in all subjects of combat training of this course (with an overall rating of not lower than "good" ), positively characterized in service. In this course, the main subjects are special fire, special physical and tactical training of troops.

To me it seems that Equestria and the Changelings aren’t going to be able to do anything to Chrysalis without the risk of starting a war with the Griffons.

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