A street rat is saved by an angel in pale yellow. How will this act of kindness change her?
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Alaborn
Somewhere in the USA. Probably older than you. And something about MLP:FIM makes me want to write stories. Unfortunately, being gainfully employed cuts into my writing time.
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Before I read it, what is the Dark tag for ?
7710309 Well, that would reveal the whole plot of the story. It's something you won't see Fluttershy do on screen.
7710578 then P.M. me !
p.s. Does jes having the Dark tag spoils the story ?
Allow me spoil this story for everyone, Fluttershy is 'Ebil with a capital B and is more or less Angel Bunny's accomplice in drug induced rape. I'm not going to argue that being a victim of Flutershy's sick childhood power fantasies exonerates Angel Bunny, but being of diminished capacity as a result of Fluttershy's physical alterations and dark magic gives him some excuse for his actions.
I am shocked! It was rated teen and this thing straddles the edge, and I'd give a lot of leeway for gore and cursing under a teen rating. If this were the story of Zoe Trent, jumped by the Dazzlings and given a beat down before she was rescued by Starlight Glimmer, who then proceeded to groom her and make Zoe into her 'widdle poodle you would find it just as reprehensible. Especially if you knew she was once a criminal informant Twilight Sparkle. This isn't a revenge fantasy, in my opinion this story is strait up fetish porn for small, weak minded, cowardly, and power hungry pedo-bears.
It's Dark tag is well earned, but at what cost. The act of rape is left up to the reader, but seeing as how the posthumously named 'little bunny' was mind wiped, enthralled, just barely has locomotion, and no longer possesses autonomy (much less the capacity to resist becoming a slave) the outcome is inevitable once she enters Angel Bunny's den. For those more familiar with Spells R' Us or transactional analysis this was a very sick game of Rapo and the payoff is worse than a simple 'was that wrong? or a 'sorry about that'. This story was just plain icky and mean.