"Life is your story. Take the chances and write it." ~Fatima Azam (Sparkler Shine MLP) Hello my fellow pony lovers! Just a girl who loves this show, and loves to write! Is a bit crazy at times, cya!
Being kicked out of the Wonderbolts. Her life-long dream was crushed. All because of her. Well, at least that's how it all sounds to Lightning Dust. But how exactly will she make things better for herself?
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Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
And you feel sorry for Lightning..? Wasn't my intention but I'll roll with it!
Will Lightning Dust be badass in this story?
Looks interesting so far.....
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Thanks! *brohoof
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Half and half. She opens up her heart as the story progresses.
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Make the story better... When I get the chance to update...
Ha! I love Lightning, but i won't really ship her with Soarin... Or maybe now I might try to...
I GOTTA PLAN IN MIND!
MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Or... You mean I'm shipping Lightning and Sparkler, but that wouldn't make sense. XD
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Don't worry! SoarinDash will stay... But shipping is now involved in this story..!
MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Well, this is awkward. There is no way Spitfire would allow somepony that got kicked out of the academy by trained by their janitor, let alone her second-in-command.
For once, I want to read a story where Twilight and the ones on the balloon take responsibility for flying into a Wonderbolts Training Facility during training and unannounced.
Every time I read a Lightning Dust story with her getting callously thrown up the academy, it pisses me off.
AND HERE WE GO!
The moment Lightning Dust tries to kill herself. The main thing that pisses me off. I hope not to see or hear from either Rainbow Dash or Spitfire for the rest of the story, but I know that's not going to happen.
7748208 Thank you SO MUCH for saying this.
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Uh... Sorry..?
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Yeah. I get what you're saying. I knew about that being a trouble, that's why I said that they filled out some kind of papers at the bottom of the Wonderbolt Training Place in the first chapter. Ya know, where Lightning has her dream?
And yea... Poor Trixie, Ironwill, and Lightning!
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Okay... Uh... Erm... You do know that I was trying to say that when the whole thing that happened was rushing back to her, she wasn't focusing, so her wings closed. She felt herself falling, and didn't bother to open her wings again. I should've made it clear that she didn't want to kill herself. But... Ye... Uhm... I guess...
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These words are what lead me to believe that Lightning tried to kill herself.
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Sowwie, I'll try to make it more clear...
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I did want her to try and kill herself, but not directly. It was her wings closing that made her want to kill herself. She wasn't aware of her wings closing. I just updated it. Can you try to see if it changes just a bit???
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WAIT I FORGOT TO SAVE IT!
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There, now I saved it.
Hey, THIS LOOKS AWESOME! I was just looking through stories and ended up finding this one. I
it, but I wish I came up with this idea! I'd love to write it something like this, it seems fun.
You also haven't been on Fimfiction for a bit, so I'm doubting that you might see this comment, but at least anybody else who does would found appreciation for it!
Seriously, I feel sorry for Lightning, but I also find a few mistakes in this. I mean, if the main characters filled out a form, how could the rest of the academy know that they were coming? Not to mention, having a self insert is something I wasn't expecting. I'm pretty sure the story might be left like this, but it does have potential. Anyways, I'd currently give it a 6/10, good job, and PLEASE KEEP WRITING!