The second story of Pumpkin's struggles. But its a one shot chapter.
Pumpkin Cake has been confined and kept safe in a psychiatric ward; while continuing receiving support and comfort from her family.
Now, 7 years have passed and she is finally coming back home. How will things work out between her and Pinkie Pie... as well as her brother, Pound Cake?
(Contains some mild violent descriptions)
Its not over yet; the story continues here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50585/love-is-a-lie
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Nice...creepy...but nice. Would you please make another chapter?
That was... interesting.
Besides several grammatical mistakes, it has a good premise. The whole thing was a tad rushed, and I think the pov changed somewhere in there, but not too bad.
Pinkiemena DOES run in the family.....Actually, Pinkie isn't related to the Cakes, isn't she? She just went there after leaving the rock farm, to get a job? i dunno. But great story!
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I'm leaving off of this for now; but if I get inspiration down the road...
I might.
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Yeah, I just felt like making another character go un-innocent. And since nobody did anything about the fanart comic that this story was based on... I did.
But anyway... thanks for the 'like.'
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Was it a bit rushed? Maybe...
But thank you for the 'like'. If I feel like I need to add something else, you'll will know.
However... can't right now! Thinking up new story.
I think she got it a bit too easy. And I see what you did there at the end. I wuld have wanted to see her strugel to get her other side down totaly, and strugel to get her brothers total trust. It wuld bee a longer and maybe even more tempting fiction. I wuld realy want to see more.
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; and I would love to think of something to continue this story world.
Someone asked me the same request
But right now, I'm putting it to the side to try other ideas I have; I'm working on one right now. If I do start to continue it, you'll be informed.
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Okey. Sometimes we don't see that something can continue, but how or if one will do it is the hard part.
I finally have some free time to read this story... And it was great! I loved the picture at the end it brought a big gin on my face, same goes to reading this story it's just one nice slice of life
I read "Pumpkin's Tantrum Spree", and I gotta say, this story is moar hardcore.
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Are you sure about that?
For anyone who is wondering about Pumpkin's cutiemark, her parents sometimes showed her about what they do in the shop and she became fascinated in it and wanted to do it herself. The doctors let her practice in the hospital kitchen with her parents and unicorn specialists' supervision. She eventually not only develop a love for cooking sweets, but created her very own Pumpkin Pie creation
; but I don't feel like describing that.
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Oh man Pumpkin. I feels for ya. But it will get better with the right approach.
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Yeah, you're right... but wait until you start reading the third story
1467676Third...story...?
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Yep, the first 3 chapters of it ("Love is a Lie") are already up.
But WARNING: it contains a couple of OCs that you might want to strangle!
Jesus, I thought we would get a cupcakes scenario here, I got scared for a moment. xD
Attending the Psychiatric Homecoming was truly enlightening! It's comforting to see the community come together to support mental health initiatives. Comprehensive Psychiatric Services played a pivotal role, offering a wide range of support and resources for those in need. Their dedication to holistic care is commendable, fostering a sense of hope and healing for all involved. FInd Out More:- Empowermh