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Penn Hooven


Writer and fanfiction reviewer. Feel free to say hi.

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She was gone. Your best friend in the whole world was gone. All because of her own, stupid, pigheadedness. And yet, all you can do is stand over her grave in the rain.

(rated Teen for subject matter)

(Now with an amazing audio read by Forgotten Dreams. Go give him some support. Link here https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_continue=678&v=dIbXNzmnMH0)

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Comments ( 9 )

The rain falls eerily on this small tale...

This is amazingly detailed and depressing. I love it. It's an amazing sadfic and I didn't notice one flaw! :scootangel: It's really well written, and the details were absolutely perfect. This is an awesome story. :yay: Great job!

7695572 why thank you very much. :twilightsmile:

7695733 I lost my brother to a car accident back in 2001. So this piece is as much of what I went though at the time as much as it is a sad story of AJ and RD.

7697861 i've had a time to mourn for him. And because of my own religious beliefs, I believe I'll get to see him again after this life. So I'm making the best I can with what life is giving me .

I appreciate your sentiment.

Also I very well may do readings of some of your other works as well as there a few that I really like. Keep up the good work!

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I am honestly stunned right now. That was amazing. I never expected anyone to pay attention to this story. Thanks!

The cold wetness of the rain seemed to chill even more against your body as you recall the heart stopping moment when you heard the knock on the door and knew. You didn't need Captain Spitfire and Sourin there, carrying nothing but her goggles and grim looks of anguish. You didn't need to hear them stumble through an account of how the stunt went wrong. You didn't need to see your sister break down and weep while the two Wounderbolts stood awkwardly still. You knew. You knew, from the moment you walked away from that fight, that it was the last time you'd see her again.

*Soarin *Wonderbolts

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