What started as a regular visit to the Crystal Empire with Spike and her friends, quickly turned into a disaster for Twilight Sparkle. When her crown is stolen and the Empire is attacked by a mysterious creature, Twilight must make chase after this " Sunset Shimmer ". With Spike by her side she follows the thief through a mirror, a mirror which takes the two of them two a strange new world, a world filled with wondrous creatures of all shapes and sizes, creatures, known as Pokemon. Upon arriving realizes that both she and Spike have undergone a serious change, they must adapt and learn about the world around them to find Sunset Shimmer, but the longer they're there, the more unfolds to them, as the picture is much bigger than Sunset, leading Twilight and her new friends from the trainer's academy, throughout the entirety of the Eques region. Follow her as she goes through this beautiful region, finding friends both old and new to her, seeing amazing and terrifying things alike. With the power of friendship and Pokemon alike, Twilight will do whatever she can to take back what is rightfully her's, and prevent a disaster that could destroy this world, and Twilight's world alike.
Let's see where this goes. I get the feeling that Twilight will be gone st least 30 moons, possibly more.
Nice start dude, love to see were this gose..
So need any background trainers because I have one you can use Klhan Star and his Totodile
7692855 Sure I'm always in need of characters to use, only question is, do you want him to appears early on, or when the real adventure begins
7692882 During the real adventure, PM me if you need mot info that is not in the story.
7693196 Alright then, I will do that
7693355 Thanks for the input
, and I'd gladly accept any characters, and like I said in my little authors note at the end, I had been writing it at around 3 AM. I just got back from a trip and really wanted to get it up, so I wasn't really working at my best.
Took the name from Digimon World Dusk and Dawn?
7693452 Nope, referencing the upcoming Pokemon games
7693455 Despite the fact that there's never been a pokemon game with dusk and dawn
Observe
Interesting.
I wonder which starter Pokémon Twilight will start with?
In which of the nations of Pokemon will this story take place in?
7699304 If by nations you mean the region, the story takes place in a new region, the Eques region, but there will be characters from other regions, including one of the main OC's in the story, I might consider having it move to another region later on.
How much time does Twilight have same as in the movie, feels sada s there so much she could do if she had more time.
Also Sunset very hardcore even before she got turned to a Demon.
7699367 Well I'm contemplating changing a lot for the school, just so she can get through faster, but at the same time have more opportunities to do more
So are you creating a new starter Pokémon or will you be using any from the starters from the games. I can so see Twilight with Rowlet.
7699467 I actually don't know what starter I want her to have, I'm only using Pokemon that are out, as of the moment, so 7th gen pokemon need to wait a week to pop up. As for her starter I was leaning more towards something nontraditional, but at the same time, fitting, sort of like ash with Pikachu, just not so cliche. I'm planning out the third chapter as we speak so we'll just have to see from there.
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That's cool. Let's see her choices and then let the debates begin!
7699569 I do have most of her team pre-selected, as with all the characters, but the first pokemon is something that can always change, and with her receiving it in this upcoming chapter, it is a pretty big decision
7699525 How about Clefa(Clefariy was supposed to be Ash's starter at one point) or Gothita.
7699608 Originally it was going to be an espeon, but that was cliche even for Twilight, so I opted to let someone else in the story to have it
7699941 My only reasoning for basically going by the movie was so I could move the chapter along, trust me when I say the next chapter will be much different, I don't like spoiling anything but I will confirm that there is no dance, no princess competition, I want to move past the school as quick as I can while still getting as much story by as possible. So aside from a few small things everything else will be different, I'm sorry if the second chh did not meet up to the standards of the first, I truly am
Nice Chapter, Shy and Ursaring never saw that coming but I love it. And last; Sunset does not deserve a Flareon.
That's strange, why aren't the starter pokemon from the six regions there?
So Twilight chose an eevee, now if it ever wants to evolve I wonder what it will become?
7703284 That's a simple question, While Celestia may be a pokemon professor, she doesn't have designated pokemon to give out like all the rest do, instead she hatches eggs for students who don't have their own pokemon, which isn't a very common thing seeing as all of her students are in their late teens, and the starting age of a trainer is ten
7703766 I see, that makes sense
Thank good she got a Eevee and not Chingling or Wynaut, I hate does two. It's Pokémon not Pokemon, just so you know.
7703462 well if she wanted to kick sunsets ass the logic choice is vaporion but i never liked that eveelution, Umbreon would be cool, but it dosnt match her, espion or sylvion to match her magic use, but someone already has an espion (ten bucks luna has umbreon) but if im honest it probably wont evolve and just kick sunsets ass without eveelution
7706676 I'm glad you enjoyed it, and yeah my proofreader/editor says I have to work on the commas too.
A Caterpie that knows bug bite? Is that possible?
7763144 It is, it's a move that Caterpie can learn if you hold off on evolving it for a while
7765236 I'm glad you like how everything is going, again I'm sorry for my errors, I'm getting back into the habit of writing after being away for so long, so I guess you could say I'm a tad bit rusty
. As for Eevee and Caterpie I didn't do much with them this chapter cause I had alot planned next chapter, I'm introducing a new character, I'm pushing Twilight towards leaving the school and heading out into the world and I'm putting depth into the plot. I will say that I can't catch every grammatical error and with my proofreader away from her home It puts the extra pressure on me as a writer so I try my best alone. Still, I hope I can improve more than I have been so that I fix the little problems I'm having
That's was cool.
That was an awesome chapter my friend I'll be waiting for the next upload for this story keep me posted on the story thanks
Intresting you gave Rainbow a shiny Staravia... Very intresting
... I did the same...
Hey if it was named Star then...
Great Chapter by the way
Nice chapter and nice choice of pokemon partners so far. So I have to say, the fight with Rainbow Dash was doubtable at best, Eevee is about level 5-6 if we speek in game terms, Satravia has to be bitween 14 and 34. No way would a battle howned pokemon go down by a single tackle of a untrained opponent.
Second: Please don't make Junior a travil companoin of Twilight. It will take a lot out the story, and tight situation espatialy, if there is some "Mary Sue"-like person around to always bust their asses out. Twilight sould find her own way. She has to fall, to rise and to fall again, to go through a believable character development.
8052572 I'm not going off of levels, as much as I love the games and have played everyone using that system in a story is just kind of boring so I'll be using aspects from the anime. Even if it did go by the games rules that tackle would have been a critical hit with same type attack bonus so it would still do a bit of damage. And the reason I use this logic is because of the freedom it grants me to write. As for Junior he plays an important part in the story and to Twilight's growth as a trainer and vice versa. As for him being some "mary sue" he's far from that, he seems that way because hes an experienced trainer like Sunset is, while Twilight is still new to it. I've said it before, no one trainer will outshine others, sure some might get more time in the story than others at certain times, but everybody gets an equal spotlight in this story, OCs and main characters alike, everyone will get character growth, and unlike the anime I won't just introduce a character only to make them disappear afterwards.
This is just in! Lycanroc has a new form called Lycanroc Dusk form.
Does this takes place in the anime?
Will you be using fake Pokemon?
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No, only already existing pokemon. Not that I have anything against fakemon, I just prefer to use the actual ones for this.
It good your not letting the comenets denture you from writing, have seem to many as of late give up because of comments.
Also are you going to add Pokemon from Alola?
It’s alive.
(Blinks eyes) damn
I have a feeling that Ash and Pikachu are going to appear on the scene and defeat Sunset with Ash's Charizard who will teach Flareon and all of Sunset's Pokémon a painful lesson.