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I write weird shit. That's really it.

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Won't have the chance to read this for a few hours, but based on past history and the description, I anticipate top-notch material.

I think you meant to say "gender ambiguous" in the description

7688213 I probably did.

Good fic. Not normally a fan of 2nd person, HiE, or human on pony, so imagine my surprise when I enjoyed this story. Good job.

P.S. I love the term "cum-coma", and I advocate its continued use

Amm
Amm #6 · Nov 2nd, 2016 · · ·

The wave hits your throat and immediately moves into your stomach. It’s thick from the time she was pent up, and you can feel the viscosity hit your stomach. Like icing, it coats your esophagus and moves into your stomach.

Ending three sentences in a row with 'your stomach' is odd, might want to vary that a bit.

7695218 I'm curious as to what you think was more "female" in this story. I thought I did a decent job of making it as ambiguous as possible, but I could be wrong.

7695797 and? I don't know if you've heard of them, but there are these people called "gay men", who are men that prefer sex with men and male genitalia.

7695848 7695797 Then ofcourse there are also Pansexual's (also known as omnisexual's) who enjoy everyone equally, Asexual's who enjoy no one they don't have an emotional or intillectual attachment to, and there are some heterosexual males that enjoy the male genetalia but not the male parter themselves, hence where this fits in as Rarity and the reader are two different genders.

7696253 So? obviouvsly if this was a guy (though its ambiguois so its whoever the current reader wants it to be) then he would be gay or at least pansexual/bisexual.

7696253
I get where you're coming from. You like what you like and you don't what you don't, and that is completely fine. You are in no way bound to like, approve of, or even tolerate someone else's sexual peccadillos. In the future, though, if you see "futa" anywhere in a story's description or title, expect chicks with extra large dicks.

The story pic is cropped, and I've seen the full one but I don't know how to link it, but let me tell you... fufufufufufufuuu... Good lawd...

In sharp contrast to her white fur, she had a set of deep, ebony testicles larger than your own, about the side of large oranges.
This line kind of removes the ambiguity.

You said to report ant grammar errors so here you go.

“Well, my wonderful assistant, let’s started, shall we?”

you’re missing a “get”. I’m loving the fic by the way. 👍🏻

Found another one.

Your first step is to cup them, one in each palm, as they get perfectly in your larger than normal hands.

get should be fit.

Here’s another.

You savor it, making sure to suck up and pre you may have missed.

and should be the.

Nice fic. That was fun.

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