Graveyard at the Graveyard

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Sunset Shimmer needs a job, and there don't seem to be many to choose from for someone in her position. Fortunately, she stumbles across a part time entry level position as a security guard at a local cemetery. The only problems are the place is rumored to be haunted, and it's the graveyard shift.

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wiccanminnesota

wiccanminnesota #1 · Nov 3rd, 2016 · · ·

I can see Rainbow pulling a few tricks on Sunny then Sunny pays Dashy back BIG time.

HelgaButtercup

HelgaButtercup #2 · Nov 3rd, 2016 · · ·

OMg, is there a sequel ??

SmokeTester

SmokeTester #3 · Nov 3rd, 2016 · · ·

7692549 If you think of one, let me know

wayward_pony

wayward_pony #4 · Nov 3rd, 2016 · · ·

The opening was a little slow, but that may be because I know bits of what was gunna happen going in. Few nitpicks aside, once the story started unfolding it was quite a lot of fun and well-paced

The writing for Rainbow Dash and Sunset Shimmer are both pretty good. I could "hear" the characters speaking their dialogue. Good mixture of humor and suspense throughout, as well as tying in elements from MLP and EQG.

People who're asking for more want to know what's up with Stone Grey. There's stuff that can still be explored here.

Peace

SmokeTester

SmokeTester #5 · Nov 4th, 2016 · · ·

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The writing for Rainbow Dash and Sunset Shimmer are both pretty good. I could "hear" the characters speaking their dialogue

Thanks! That's probably a result of me watching Rainbow Rocks and Friendship Games seven hundred times (though that's an exaggeration... it's probably closer to six hundred fifty).

7691991 Maybe that's the sequel.

Though I'm not sure Sunset is the type.

Comment posted by SmokeTester deleted Nov 4th, 2016

Snowdrifter