UST READ IT! IT IS ABOUT DERPY WHO WILL BE FORCED TO GO TO CANTERLOT BECAUSE OF HER LIVING CONDITIONS!
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musya_musya
Hello! and i am Rarity!i am beautiful and geneorous!i am the best but still i have a lot of stories which yu must read! Bye!
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even though it's not highly edited it is very good
and
+ doctor hooves = 
cool
Do i
or 
at this.....i am so 
I'm confused, nice plot but the lack of editing has made it hard to read.
Could we pleaaaaaaseeee have a sequel!?
I really enjoyed the stoy and I want to see more with Depry ands friends 
I look forward to any others tories that yuou write! 
also yo are a great eriter and I hope you keep writng!
so in conclusiuon very awesome fic
I loved evety moment 
Your descriptions are so vivid and I enjoyed the end really.
I think you have SO potential.
OMG I LOVE DEPRY SO MUCH!
Plz write seequel. Plz.
88738 "my immortal" was 44 chapters long, and most definitely a trollfic.
idk bout this one since i didnt read it, but just so u know lol. have a wonderful day, everypony 
90259
I dont know who you just think you are, but this is not the trollfic.
How can you critisize without even reading? You don't know.
Its good, musya. Keep writng. Don't let haters discourage.
You're...kidding. Right? You are kidding? You are? Good. Then I don't need to tell you how incredibly shitty this is. You wonderfully abuse the idea of a character, butcher the very concept of plot, and don't even have any real conflict. Stellar job.
You are kidding, right?
375679
Sadly, no. There is no joke here. At first, I thought so too. This must have been a massive troll, right?
Well, after reading through his/her/its blog posts, and other stories, I can safely say we just have a really really bad writer on our hands. Some serious practice is needed.
It took me NANOSECONDS to notice that this was a trollfic! The picture alone is bad enough to point it out!
TYPING IN ALL CAPS DOESN'T MAKE YOUR STORY STAND OUT, NOR DOES
BEGGING THE READER TO LOOK AT IT.
THIS WAS VERY PAINFUL.
TO READ, I MEAN. NOT WRITE.
MAYBE IF I HAD ARTHRITIS OR SOMETHING. I DUNNO.
I'M GONNA GO WASH MY EYES OUT WITH A FLAMETHROWER.
Wait. Trollfic? Who the hell writes a trollfic? If this is serious I have to ask: What the fuck are you doing? I can't read this!
Know what? I'm going to bed, maybe it will make sence in the morning...