It's Apple Bucking season at Sweet Apple Acres but the vampire fruit bats have invaded again and are eating more than their share of the orchard. If that weren't enough, the Castle of the Two Sisters has mysteriously been fully restored and there's a mysterious mare living in it. But she's no ordinary mare, she's a bat pony with her own army of bats. Who is she? Where did she come from? Could she be a possible threat to Equestria?
Don't worry, I will return to this story once I get over my writers block
Chapters (5)
Pony creator cover art, OC bat pony and a 274 word chapter do not make for a good first impression.
That picture is horrorifing
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Well Chapter 3 isn't completed yet. And as for the picture, it was a placeholder till I complete the one I intend to have there. So don't be so harsh
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It's actually spelled horrifying. And do you mean that in a good way or a bad way???
7713545 in a coolcat way
7713541 I'm not trying to be harsh. I'm letting you know people will see those three things and judge you, fair or not.
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Well I changed the image and as soon as I finish chapter 3, I'll upload it. It's not like I've given up on it
7715809 There is not a percentage high enough to show how much better your new cover art is.