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The Grand Galloping Gala left many a heart broken, dream crushed, or mouth tasting bitter. In its aftermath, Wonderbolt escapee Soaren finds himself in Ponyville, with a solution to all three, at least for an orange earth pony whose bark most definitely matches her bite.
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This has a lot of promise as a story. I can't wait for the next chapter!
I love the soarin/jack shipping the most.
Oh wow.... you get me a date and I'll get you date? Soaren, you're sly fox) Wanna buck that Apple? Don't we all
Keep up the work!
another awesome story to track once again
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
TERSE BE MY WAIFU
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Whoa, that's uncanny. Moments before you made this comment I came to check the page and respond to some comments, and, bam, then this turns up. I'm a little scared.
Anyway, I'M ALREADY YOUR WAIFU NTSTS, YOU KNOW THAT
Anyway, to the rest of you guys, I'm glad you're enjoying it! I shall put up some more posthaste, probably tomorrow! Maybe even today if you're lucky!
i'm loving this story so much! Can't wait for what's next! (hoping for more
moments!! XD)
interesting
Things were fine until you got to the "family dinner". Then the perspective started zipping around so much I got whiplash. Pinkie's holding out well, then she's the saddest one at the table, Applejack sits down to eat and then she and Rainbow Dash are in the foyer fighting...maybe you need to narrow Twilight's perspective, or leave her's earlier so she isn't trying to tell the reader everything at once?
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Fair is fair! I get told that a lot, that my perspectives shift far too quickly and haphazardly for anyone besides me to follow. If you're finding it troubling, man, I can see about correcting it! Is there anything in particular you take umbrage with or should I just pass over that section and pad it out to smooth the transitions and my thought processes over? The problem I have is it makes absolute sense to me, so I need you to be specific so I know what to correct.
It's Soarin'
Sorry, had to do it once. Love the story, keep up the great work!
SoarinJack
and Twinkie.
This story is amazing. I love you.
Throw Dashfire in there and you'll be my new god.
Loving the
shipping out of nowhere, great story!
this ees good, although soarin is a bit creepy in this one.
when dash froze did she do it because she wanted to be with soarin of was it because she was going to be with spitfire....can't tell
Very promising so far, keep up the good work!
I'm loving how you manage to throw in other shipping's along with the plot line... i espcially want to know more about the tickling session
so well written i cant wait for more
AWESOME!!!!!!!
PLEASE MAKE MORE!!!!
clever. this fic has an enviable problem: it is so layered with subtlety that it is easy to lose entire points in the flow of its structure.
i would recommend pointing out a few of the more important details again and again through the layers of subtlety. a few notes that emphasize the actions of character as scrutinized by their friends.
this is very well-paced, thoughtfully procured drama. the interplay of the various characters' goals off one another, producing each action, it is extremely satisfying. Like a good soap opera.
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I went through the effort of making this and everything!
Loving this story so far, never would have imagined Twilight and Pinkie together but i'm lovin this plot SO GET SOME UPDATES DONE!
... this story is so dead
love the idea and the story just needs to be updated
so if can update soon
Friggin update it laa
this story is so extinct, it was pronounced legally dead by the dodo
this story is good i hope the author hasnt abandoned it.
348079 This story is more abandoned than my old account (322886)
47260 This, I think, was the first piece of fanfiction I ever read. It's really a pity you're letting it die.
This fic has been on my too-read list for a full year now. I guess I won't start it..why set my self up for the disappointment of never reading how it ends?