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No, just no.
7802737 Thanks! :)
7802750 Who knows?
7802742 "No" what?
7802745 What's "not good"?
7803993 I'll try and cover it once I get a mic.
7804016 Who knows if she died or not. Probably it stopped there because the writer didn't want to continue it in the same fanfic.
Also, Rachel isn't a little girl-wait-who are you talking about? Amy? Yeah, she died. 
7804017 Thanks!
Interesting concept, but the pacing is all worng. I know you're trying to point out the fact that in FNaF the time is all wired, which is OK, but you didn't let any suspense build.
The conversations where hard to follow. I suggest whenever someone new is speaking is to make it a new paragraph. Or at least make it more clear who's talking.
This was rushed. I know you were trying to finish it before 2017, but why? Is there a reason it needed to be finished before then? Or did you just do it just because you wanted a deadline?
No grammar issues I can see, thumbs up for that!
Overall, this was a nice little story. Not the best, but at least I was able to enjoy it! I can't wait to see what you've got coming next! You have now gained a new follower, please don't let me regret it.
7804055 I'll try and remember that for the sequel, and yes their will be a sequel.
I wanted to get it approved before 2017 because it took place during that year and I wanted to make it futuristic. I also published a new blog post! 
7804069
OK, that's a good reason.
Now if you'll excuse me, I need to leave a couple of comments on stuff, then I'm off to bed.
7804079 Okie dokie lokey!
Great story. I'm enjoying this.
7809745 Thanks! What are your thoughts on it?
7810487 I thought it was good for a first story. I saw some things that needed some work but you do have a lot of potential.
Keep at it.
7810510 Thanks, and I will.
I won't quit at writing just yet. 
I'm also in the process of writing a Christmas special chapter. 
I'm going to publish it on Christmas day, so expect to see it then! 
I updated it!