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Pyrex Shards

I have been an on and off fanfic writer for 20 years and am in the process of exorcising writing demons. I also do poetry, but I don't do windows. http://pyrexshards.net


It has been over a half-century since Spike last saw Rarity alive. He never got to tell her those three simple words that he needed her to hear, even on the eve of her death, and it has haunted him ever since. How would Rarity have responded if Spike had managed to say "I love you?"

Enter the Spirit Candle, an enchanted candle as old as the Canterlot palace. It is able to project the shadows of spirits, and is particularly powerful on Nightmare Night during a full moon. Spike doesn't even know if it will work, but with Twilight's help, he's going to try. He may finally get his closure with Rarity. But what will the cost be?

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Comments ( 7 )

I'm going to cry like a bitch, aren't I?

Possibly. Maybe. We shall see. :twilightsmile:

Said stallion didn’t want an independent mare who would ignore him.

It's surprising he thinks exactly this, right after he's talking about the stallions like they are awful for believing that... because a SO who ignores you in favor of their career is not high on anyone's list.

I may be digging into this but it seems pretty telling that Spike would demonize her boyfriends over that they would be unhappy if she wasn't very attentive to them. That it would say a lot about Spike's relationship and how he basically went the majority of his life devoted to her but getting nothing in return.

I'm interested to see what Rarity actually thinks of this, though. It's harder to charitably get into her head... it's so easy to assume she notices but just doesn't want to set it straight, and that's hardly a kind way to think of her.

I think you're on to something there! :twilightsmile:

I'm ready to cry like a bitch, good sir. Do your worst.

7685500 when can we expect the next chapter?

When are you going to write the next chapter. I am on the edge of my seat.

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