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The Psychopath

I adopted the name of my most beloved creation and have gone about spreading the word of the Illogic. Tell me, are Illogic and chaos the same thing?


This story is a sequel to Took things too far

No matter which way you take and no matter the mistake, there is no way to switch back.

Thorax and the new changelings, lovingly dubbed 'Abstergo Species' by themselves, had trouble adjusting to their new forms and societal impacts, but that was in the past. Now they even have some younglings going to a school of friendship, proving that changelings HAVE changed and for the better.

Well, Chrysalis' brood, at least. They weren't aware of other hives, and with the rumors created by an old fool, many adventurers went on to discover potential new hives...They never came back. Chrysalis is now in a precarious situation where she could be aided with her vengeance, but have dire consequences should she fail again. The other queens aren't too pleased either, and with such aggression and potential bloodshed, the red hive isn't too far off.

Check source for art. This person has an amazing art style and coloring methodology.

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 28 )

The other hives might do well to not support Chyrsalis' vengeance and not be hostile toward Thorax's new brood. As well Chrysalis was foolish enough to lose control of her hive and Thorax's brood being in the open means attacking them means fighting their allies as well. Why risk full scale war with Thorax's Brood, The Dragon Lord, Equestria, Yayyakastan and Hippogriffa/Seaquestria for a lunatic like her? Of course lots of chances for drama between the hives if the point becomes contentious :p

Do the other hives feed on love because if they don’t; Thorax's way would only piss them off.

Not unless they use Changeling laws. I mean all different races have their own laws.

While they may look down on the Abstergo changelings, outright conflict with them would be foolish. If anything they should be attempting to make sure they don't expose other Hives.

It's more a matter of the Changeling MO is to be secretive. Chyrsalisis already broken that rule, rising exposing them all. There is no way to eliminate Thorax with out his allies noticing, which would confirm their existence and mark them as hostile. Assisting Chryssi means exposing their existence and the other races activity hunting them. Some Queens might insist that eliminating the "fallen" must happen, while others would refuse to bear the consequences and others might insist on allying with Thorax. The story will basically be the choice made and the fall out.

You want to kill me, right?

There's gonna be a very bad ending to all of this, am I right? c:

No, Blueberry Soda. Who knows what the ending will be like, though?

Y u always assume?! You know what they say about assuming.

I'm liking that they’re finding a way to destroy Thorax but I think they should focus on a more serious fact. Finding a flaw on their new forms, I mean new transformations should have a price. Nothing in life has its ups and downs.

I say the elder should find a flaw in the Changelings. I mean a major change in a race should have negative consequences. There is nothing in life that a major change stay positive. There is always consequences in life.

I forgot. It happens a lot

The Elder seemed to have a point for a moment there, but it seems she's just motivated by them being different.

Why they seem so determined to destroy Thorax's changelings doesn't really make sense.

Betrayal is a major Taboo to them. Try to imagine Bees, Ants or Termites; They all have a queen, yes? What would happen if they got rid of their queen and there was no next queen?


Don't forget the blue changeling queen (Which I'm going to make with a fun little dynamic in the next chapter :3)


Why didn't you respond to my comment?

Oh. The 'what is Abstergo' thing? Sorry. I missed it. It's just a name. No real meaning behind it other than meaning 'outcast'. Thorax is using it ironically. Never really intended to explain it. Just wanted it to be a name.

When will story continue

I can start work on a chapter tomorrow if you like. I was just focusing on Weary Traveler.

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