This story is a sequel to Batty Love
Note: I’m still writing the fanfic for this couple titled Batty Love (I'm kinda going through writers block). But since Halloween is so close, I wanted to do something for it involving an OC pairing. I’ll put up the fanfic when I finish it. 
It might be a bit rough around the edges, but it's my first creative writing in a while.
So Nightmare Night has come to Ponyville again. Every pony is celebrating and having fun on this festive night and Princess Twilight Sparkle wants to invite Ruby (bat pony) and her colt friend, Comet. After the events of Batty Love, the Princess of Friendship wants to show a gesture of good faith. But Comet and Ruby have other plans.
(Art done by MLPGal)
Chapters (1)
Review:
Grammar: 10
Tags: 10
Genre/Category: 10
Thoughts/Ideas: A short very nice little story, not anything too special or grand, not anything to be particularly famous or noteworthy, but very well done for what it means to accomplish. A good read if you don't want something sweet or cute or dark or funny, it really does truly define a 'Slice of Life' story without any more tags.
The Original Characters are nice, well developed because yes, I can hear their voices (or at least what I want them to be/sound like) in my head/mind.
It's nothing too terrible, it's good, but not great.
It just wouldn't stand out in my head as the first or best Slice of Life story, unless of course they specified a bat pony and/or OC, in which case, yes, this probably would be the very first one to come to mind (right now at least).
Definitely worth the read, maybe not worth a fave, but definitely should be in a bookshelf somewhere/
Total: 7/10
hey, it's aj the autistic pony, and sorry i never got back to ya, but is this what you needed lines for?
8008906
Yes. But it's ok. Do you commission art work?
8009002
Afraid not
8009504
Alright. It's ok. I have other stories where a male voice might be needed. If you wouldn't mind helping then, you're more than welcome.
8010861
So you need me for this still?
P. S. There is a bat pony tag you know!
8052739 awesome