Arrogance is just a mask, a shield against the world outside of our own existence. That's the funny thing about masks; we always cast them aside to put on another.
[Character list is 'hidden' so as to not spoil the story. Contains light shipping and dark elements]
Special thanks to:
Max Aravaras - For making that awesome header.
Flutterkay - For making the awesome coverart.
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Hmmm... I have enjoyed this. I like how this story makes me like Trixie. Good job :D
You know, I read this when it was only a paragra-*shot*
I like it so far, keep it up.
very very awesome in so many ways! :D
(Manly Tear)
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850494 Ok... that made me laugh.
+1 internets for you sir!
It's about time!
But seriously, here we go. War face engaged.
850521 Sorry mate... takes a while to make it good y'know.
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But seriously though, this made me sad.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/eenope.png
D:
850640 That was the intention
850524 Oh trust me, I know. Haha. Ya did well with your time constraints, I reckon.
I cried. SO . BUCKING. HARD.
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Sucessful sadfic was successful.
I like Trixie in this one, too bad Twilight had to die. She is my favorite pony :( makes this story even sadder for me..........
Doesn't make a lot of sense plot wise if you ask me.
Not enough details and things seem to be a bit forced and over dramatic.
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864704 Ok.... too many images.... pick 2 to keep.
Also, it isn't done yet. The epilogue will be written tomorrow and then it shall be submitted to EqD.
864713 Better?
864717 Yes.
864727 Why am I still awake . I honestly think I have insomnia
864732 I'm still awake... and I'm WRITING for Celestia's sake!
Dashed Hopes update that is
864737 I never got into Dashed Hopes... is it good?
edit: Nevermind its one of your stories...of COURSE its good.
864742 Might not be THAT good starting out... I started it around 6 months ago... and we all know how my writing was back THEN....
*shudder*
864762 Yeah I'm on chapter 2 now, its an interesting idea. Seems original enough. Not the usual she succeeds or fails.
This was a amazing story.
883008 Thank you.
Why can't I hold
all these feels
Oh, oh god D=
Trixie? Trixie?! TRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIXXXXXXXXXXXXXXIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Snake! SNAKE SNAAAKE?!?!?
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It was a joke man. No need to facehooofx4
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Still love your story, man.
891162 Hehehehe
891163
Speedy post?
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This was really good. I love fic's like this that force you to look at characters in a new light, which is exactly what you did for me. I've read story's were people give reasons to feel bad for Trixie, but the way you personified it sends it home for me. Excellent piece good sir.
915675 Thank you good sir.
It is a good fic, you give trixie character and write a undertandable plot. However...
The cuts in the story itself can make it hard to see how the story fits into itself and make it hard to place the time and space of the present.
Though I understand that it is the nature of the crimes that motivate Trixie besides in the beginning there is no mention of it, making it feel as there is little drive to Trixie's actions.
Another thing is the relationship of trixie and Twilight. There is very little to go on why Trixie is in love with Twilight, and nothing at all on why Twilight loves Trixie.
This how I see it after reading it. I could miss have missed stuff or be biased, but in the end this is how I see it and how you take this is up to you.
Last lines:
1304831 Take it you liked it then?
1304845 VEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRY much. In fact, there is only one true statement left to make: ME GUSTA
At first I was like , then I , but then , and at the end I was like .
Seeing Grey Coat getting what he deserved filled me with great pleasure.