All of us remember the classic sequel to https://www.fimfiction.net/user/DisneyFanatic23's famous story "Bride of Discord"? The one we all know as "Daughter of Discord". The story of the daughter of discord, and fluttershy, Screwball, and the son of Queen Chrysalis, Mothball. Two friends who become close lovers in a world divide by hatred, and fear. And yet they prove that their love is stronger than anything when they stand together against all odds against the vile machinations of Chrysalis. And prove that they are far stronger together than apart.
But what if there was one detail which made things a little more complex than before? Like the presence of a certain, evil centaur who had his own eyes set on revenge, and conquest? What if he was the one manipulating all those around him? And what if the changeling prince, in desperation, went to him to get his wish to be made real? An AU where the presence of Lord Tirek himself changes events ever so slightly, but still in significant ways. Can our lovestruck duo still be together in the end? Or will all of equestria suffer in the end as a result? The story, as you'll see, is a tale of love, and darkness.
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A Little Mermaid approach. Nice
7652794 Thanks. I felt that it was a possibility for an AU of this story. And noone felt better suited to play the role of the big bad than Tirek himself.:)
THAT WAS AWESOME!!!! CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!
8027022 Thank you very kindly! I'm hoping i can get back to this soon.:)
I really like this story,keep doing going.
Btw:Do you have a certain date for your updates on this story?
8068157 Thanks alot. I appreciate you liking this.:) But no, i set no specific dates for anything i write. I just try to do so as often as i can when i feel that i can. Basically, like everyone else, when i feel the urge to do so. But don't worry: i'll try not to take too long in writing the next chapters. Pinkie Promise.:)
My favorite character out of all of the is Bombous I just love how you write him XD!
Thank you. All i'm doing is expanding on his character from the audio drama by making him that one guy. That one guy who's a little absent-minded, but means well.:)
When will the next update be?
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Hard to say for sure. I don't set things for a specific schedule. But perhaps i may get to this once the actual series updates itself, or something. But i may do it anyway, depending on if i'm feeling up to it.
Oh!
Ok. It's just that you hadn't uploaded anything in a long while and I was afraid you stopped the story. Glad to see I was wrong :)
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Nope. If there's one thing i'd never do, it's ever abandon any of my babies- I MEAN....stories. _OO OO_ Yeah, that's what i meant. Though it's not entirely wrong to consider them that when you make them.:D But rest assured, i'll get back to this eventually, once i have the time, and inspiration: which may happen once Daughter of Discord's final episode comes about.:)
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So glad that Chrysalis will not be informed of Mothball seing Screwball
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Oh no Mothball!
It’s Chrysalis isn’t it?
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Can do.:)
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Thank you
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That's what happens when you open up to the only Changelings who could actually care.:)
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Eeyup
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Don't worry: he's alright. But unless he can actually pull this thing off, then he's gonna have to learn the hard way what happens when you deal with Devils. Too bad Tirek's not even going to give him a chance to fulfill the deal,
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Poor Mothy...
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Come now, we all knew it was gonna be her, didn't we?:)
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Eeyup
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As it well should be, I might add.:)
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Of course.:)
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Of course.:)
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Is this story still on-going? Because it seems it's been well over a year, almost two, since the last update and I'm wondering if it's still on going and if it is, when will the next update be?
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Sorry i've taken so long with this one. Believe me when I say I haven't forgotten about it. But i've got another story i'm working on here. So it's probably gonna be a while before I ever get back to this.^^;
It's alive!
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Yes, shocking, I know.:D
Is this "version" of Lord Tirek gonna be just a "normal" main bad guy with both brain and brawn, and the true mastermind behind everything. ( So, maybe Chrysalis could be "innocent" here. And owns a huge apology to everybody/everypony at the end of the day. )
Or just turn him into a over-the-top, Overpowered Evil Demi-God like Tirathos?
Uh.....the first one, I guess.
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
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Thank you!:D
The story's premise confuses me. Is the title of this story that this story is based off of Daughter of Discord or Bride of Discord?
11258198Daughter of Discord. This is a au of that story.
How the heck is he a "monkey"? He is a centaur.
Anyway, near the end. Mothball was a coward for not telling her the truth much earlier. Or have enough confidence within himself to tell her to Shut Up, and let him explain fully.
Hopefully in the next chapter, once he fully explained. Screwball will apologize for what happened in here.
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That was a reference joke to people comparing Tirek to a monkey when he was first introduced to MLPFIM.
Yes, he should've told her of Chrysalis' plan for Screwball when he still had a voice to speak with. But then they were bamboozled by two compulsive liars who know how to get inside people's heads. I think Screwball has some right to be angry, but no right to take it out on Mothball, let alone believe either of them. Especially when they were just trying to screw with her.
No worries, though, Mothball will explain everything about the important details next chapter.
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I know this is wishful thinking. But can Chrysalis have a change of heart and be reformed? Apologizing to Mothball, Screwball, even to Discord, and the Pony cast? Unlike in the canon fan series that she just dies, the end.
I mean, with Tirek interfering and changing events, and considering that Tirek is the "the ultimate evil/villain behind it all" in this story. MAYBE he is actually the one that caused Chrysalis and Discord to be evil in the first place?
I'm not sure if I want to change the original story that much. After all, this is based on an existing fanfiction series, and I don't want to change too much. But maybe I can have her do something in the story that somewhat redeems her. Just maybe.
Update?
Nice~.
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I hoped you would like it.:)
This is fine.
All this and still no Starlight. Oh, melancholy sigh. Curse the timing of her debut appearance and fanfiction AUs.
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Good to know.