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Lunasservant1985


i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^

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Iron Will's new resturant was meant to be a clean break after the debacle of his motivational speech program, but there's a few problems. It takes a lot of work to run a business like that and his employees and another one that's worse...rats.

Zephyr's a moron who can barley do his job right and his sister's too soft in her approach to pest control, she coddles them and wants to be humane to them. Not his idea at all when it comes to handling pests.

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Well. Those rats showed iron will.

Heh, neat little fic you got here...

Iron Will's *new *restaurant was meant to be a clean break after the debacle of his motivational speech program, but there's *a problem. It takes a lot of work to run a business like that*, and there's two problems*; *his employees*, and another worse one...rats.

One is that Zephyr moron who can *barely do his job right*, and that Fluttershy, she's too soft on the pest control*, coddles the little blighters and wants to be humane to them. Not his idea at all when it comes to handling pests.

Oh god, so many spelling and grammatical errors in the description alone almost made me feel nauseous.

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im sorry sometime's even I don't know why or how the grammer ends up so bad. I think it's partly my fingers on the keyboard being inept but also I rush through typing without stopping to think and proofread and yes it makes me sick too. Mostly cause it makes me think of some of the more "infamous" writers of fan fiction if you get my drift.

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