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WaferThin


Some British twonk who wrote some horse words I suppose

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When you’re the element of laughter, is there any room for love?

When you’re Pinkie Pie, is there any chance of love?

A short but (bitter)sweet first attempt.

Artwork by by pikuseru1.deviantart.com

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Comments ( 12 )

Greetings, and welcome to...this.

Yeah, not really my thing (thus the shortness), but I gave it a go nonetheless.

Feel free to comment, give me tips on improvement, yell incoherently, etc.

This is good, especially for a first story! I enjoyed it. Poor Pinkie! :pinkiesad2:

I want to know who the pony at the window was. also as I was reading i got the Stone Sour song Through Glass in my head. I think it fit the story perfectly

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Just the title of that song is pretty fitting, to be honest...

As to the pony in question, I wanted to leave it ambiguous, to have people making their own connections instead of me shoving my own personal preferences for shipping into their faces :twilightsheepish:

I'll admit, though, I did have a specific pony in mind when writing it.

825032

Thanks! I'm (hopefully) just getting started, so it should (hopefully) be uphill from here! :twilightsmile:

826267 yea from the hints you gave us the pony in question is definately a mare as you refer to them as her or she.

826390

Darn, you've narrowed it down to...most of the characters in the show! :derpytongue2:

But yeah, it was originally a specific mare. It was only halfway through that I decided to make the alteration.

826421 well there was some other criteria that i found to narrow it down further but i wasnt sure how to write it.

is it Twilight? Do I get a cookie?

838664 I won't be telling you, but I can offer you a cookie. :pinkiehappy:

L4

:heart:

pretty interesting. LOL this is a bit stupid... but I almost feel like this would perfectly explain Pinkie's Lie (the song/music whatever it is). I've always wondered what the title meant.

This feels like pinkie without immediately changing who she is.

Eeeeep! My heart breaks! Go, Pinkie! See her! Jump up to the clouds and give Rainbow Dash the love she needs, the love you need to give!

Once again, I find myself impotently trying to communicate with fictional ponies.

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