A mysterious stranger...
A dark potion...
A spirit bent on destruction...
A number of tragic deaths...
And only three ponies to stand against it all...
The night before Nightmare Night, a salespony of the arcane shows up: interested in selling his wares. His unnerving appearance and abilities sets most of the town on edge, except for two mares: Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy are each accepting of this new stallion, and he gives them each a gift in return.
Yet, might those gifts just turn out to be curses?
And who is 'Awakening'? And who called 'Him'?
And if you take this seriously, it's your own fault.
[Be Warned]: Not my usual fluff. Reader discretion is advised.
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Chapters (2)
This was funny
7672079
Thank you, I'm glad someone enjoyed it.
7672079
Also, thank you for the fave, and follow!
7672106 no problem this is an interesting story
The prose could use a little work. Additionally, I'd say this didn't do anything spectacular. Brother Grimm was introduced as a plain, generic "mysterious type." I know not all stories can be winners, but because it's so short, I would have preferred, nay expected, a higher quality to everything.
7673849
Prose?
And yeah, it wasn't intended to do/be anything spectacular: it's supposed to be a parody/satire of the horror genre.
I will take note of those points, though. Thanks!
7673866 Prose is just your language that exhibits grammar and natural flow of speech. I say it can use some work because right now it just doesn't compare to most authors I read.
7674678
Okay, Yeah. This is definitely not my crowning achievement, especially in the sense of grammar. Thanks for pointing that out.
This now has a "Everything Wrong With"/ Reading Sins by me, feel free to check it out if you want to.
EWW Brother Grimm
7839240
Awesome! I'll get to that once I can. Thanks!