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Neutral Boy


First time of writing my own stories on here since the first episode of my little pony friendship is magic.

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"Do I really feel alone again, after no one was able to believe me?"

That question still remains unanswered to Sunset Shimmer after her friends accuse her of being Anon-A-Miss. Now she wanders off alone for about five days and decides to pay a visit to the hospital. Sunset has grew curious of a certain patient boy named Luis Trevor that she's only seen a few times from awhile ago while his mask is covered up. What she doesn't know is that this masked boy has a troubling past that he needed to run far away from his home, along with his little sister to stay with his cousin Redheart. Each of these two only want to have a normal peaceful life and leave their broken past behind them.

When these two have finally meet each other face to face, what's going to happen now? Will Sunset's own friends find her to say they are sorry and ask for forgiveness after they were all wrong? What dark secrets has Luis been keeping away from everyone whenever he keeps his mask on? And can anyone be safe from twelve zodiac monsters that'll reign down hell on everyone's lives? All will slowly begin to reveal as things will get much worse in Canterlot High...

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Comments ( 3 )

Interesting idea, but you really need an editor. There's the group called Looking For Editors (I'm on mobile, can't link) if you want to find one.

The only way I can see this guy being defeated is if you have powers of your own.

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