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NEW SOUR SWEET STORY!
Was this meant to be an epilogue or a prologue? I'm confused.
7659274 Epilogue, sorry. I typed the wrong word It's fixed.
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>tfw I haven't read anything after A Sour Sweet Gesture
Haha, this story is great, full of hilarious moments. The mouth-tape game, Ha!
Also, about your medical knowledge, I have no idea if lithum is bad during pregnancy but logically you would think that it would be bad. I mean if it can pass through the blood-brain barrier then surely it would have no problem getting the the placenta. And you don't want a developing child getting a huge dose of pharmaceuticals.
Also, I'm with Sour on Anti-vaxxers, they are so stupid.
Damn.
7659291 I can't be the only one who wants to see Bitter Honey grow up get her own series and get shipped with Gretchin can I? PLEASE JUST DO IITTTTTT!!!!!
Sour's rant caused this to pop in my head:
I really want to be a doctor but damn 11 years? I could be something else in those 11 years, like a toaster or something.
Rate this 5/7
I didn't expect Sugarcoat to be the best thing in this story.
"Second Person"
...you bloody feckin genius!
I just woke up and found this story, and this line already made my day
Okay first, yes, just yes.
Second(ly), did you see.....this?
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I've been with these stories since the first. By far the best Sour Sweet stories written. You've dived into her mind, given her a hope, made us hope for her, and more.
If this was the final in the Sour Sweet stories, I would like to say...Bravo, good sir! You've done wonderfully!
7659706 Credit for the name goes to Kul, actually.
Interesting and kind of funny, although duct tape wouldn't quite work that well. It probably would have come loose during the sex, and at best would have been hanging off the side of her mouth when they were finished.
Really, at this point, why haven't they bothered to buy a proper gag?
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Yeah, that and this picture inspired that joke.
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Cause fetishes can run in the family just as much as sexual sensitivity
7659592 I find the concept both intriguing and utterly terrifying.
Why is the dinosaur fetish a thing!? Where did it come from!? WHY!!??
Another great story as usual, and I can't wait to read the surprises in stored for Bitter.
7659969 HA! That one's funny
Hell yeah, 20 has arrived! Woo! Finally, I get to update my page~ Reading it ASAP.
Good story. I was starting o wonder what was in store for he future
I am so glad you wrote this story! I know I'm gonna sound weird but honestly, I've been waiting for a good duct tape fic involving sex for a long time. Please don't take it as weird...
Ok, I'm one of those people who down-voted your story, however I respect you and this series enough to say why:
1) Wasted potential: I see those flashback scenes and I want to see/know more, I know you don't want to do stories covering these important things in the 15 year gap, but it just seems that your letting so many great Sour Sweet Stories fall by the wayside
2) Lack of focus: The flashbacks just seem to disjoint the entire story, at least in my opinion. In addition, in my opinion, Sour Sweet is best when she's playing off something, like her episodes, Second Person, her Friends, Fluttershy, etc. however you skip around enough, especially with the flashbacks, that your don't get enough consistency.
3) Jarring transition: First, I don't mind your 3rd person Sour Stories, however doing a 3rd Person Story, with Second Person in 3rd Person, after a 15 year jump, is just jarring.
Still, I have loved this series and hope for a return to form with your next Story
Woo! Awesome stuff, once again! I love the little hints of background, it's perfect~
Hm, I wonder, how much is Bitter Honey like her mother, hm? Do I smell a new plot in the making?
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I agree, tho I didn't downvote.
Also, I kinda feel that SS has outlived her course. I'm ready for stories that focus on other characters.
I just died right there.
... I'm sorry, but I expected more. Considering the stories in the past, this was, well...
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Well this certainly made up for it.
And now, for the full review!
Chapter One:
Chapter Two:
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Also:
Well, I'm writing that one fic involving an alternate version of Second Person (Who has a real name). And with what Bitter Honey said about Gretchen gives me a somewhat perverted idea involving the mouth-tape game, thugs with dirty mugs in an alley, and a badass old man kicking ass. The perverted bit only involves Bitter and Gretchen. But the thugs and the old man... I'll leave that to be discovered in the fic.
Is it even possible to know ones sexuality this young
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Absolutely. I remember in college where a classmate who was an older woman mentioned that she knew her son was gay since age three. I myself had a girlfriend in kindergarten (just an immature "I like you"/"I like you, too" deal, of course).
SHE'S RIGHT HERE CATCHING FLIES WITH HER MOUTH BECAUSE SHE JUST HEARD YOU!
7661423 Like Gran Turino?
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If Walt was a guy who was secretly totally insane and still in his physical prime, then kinda. But that would be the final chapter.
Kinda cheesy, but sweet (yeah, yeah, I know, sour sweet).
You should have added some lightning bolts to the rainbows, because that would have been Flash Sentry's magic.
The moral of the story? VACCINATE YOUR KIDS, DICK-FOR-BRAINS!!!
I'll tell ya'll a secret.
I had no clue this was a clop fic until half-way through. I then skimmed until I reached the next part of the story.
When will the next story come out?
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I'm kinda in a funk right now thanks to some mild depression so I don't know when I'll be in the right state of mind to put out another full story. Stay tuned.
7788686 Alright
Just don't forget we all love you, okay?
Ok, i don't get it. Is this the epilogue of this story, or of the entire series? I don't mind either way, it had a good run, but it just wasn't clear enough for my dense block head
7902563 The overall series is on hiatus right now due to some personal stuff I'm going through. When I get over everything and do write my final Sour Sweet story, I will clearly label it the final one.
7902655 ah, I see. Well, I hope everything gets gets better for you.
Is this the end?
I mean they are married, have a kid, and life seems to be great. Unless Bitter is like her mom.
If there is more sequels, I'LL WELCOME IT! ME WANT MORE!
I'm not saying I want all her children to have some type of mental deficiency, but I hope they get a son that has tourettes. Or maybe another girl with Multiple Personality Syndrome. I just think some people with certain disorders would make rather unique and fun friends.
I blame Dick Figures for loving tourettes.
And that dumb Total Drama(Revenge of the)Island for liking M.P.S.
Read thru the entire series and I loved it. You just earned yourself a stalker
And thus, Facebook finally went the same way as Myspace and Friendster before it and disappeared into the internet ether. Or was it YouTube? Either or would fit.