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Flat spin


"I want coffee, but not free coffee. I want to pay for my coffee like an American!"

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Spitfire notices that Soarin is acting weird and wants to talk to him and maybe even tell him that she has a crush on him. She know that Soarin is probably still mad at her for what happened in rainbow falls but he has to get over it at some point. And maybe she is to blame but she knows that soarin has feelings for her so he cant be mad forever at her. But Soarin has different thoughts about her and his life in the wonderbolts...


Okay this one is a lot shorter than my usual fics but i wanted to write a short Soarin story. I like the idea of Soarin leaving the wonderbolts so i will at some point write this story into a bigger story. but it's not my next project.

Anyways i hope you will enjoy this story:twilightsmile:

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Comments ( 19 )

7639387 english isn't my first language... so yeah i derp out sometimes:twilightoops:.

Not bad, a little short but not bad.

Scootaloo is not, I repeat is not a chicken

This story is sooo cute and






DAMN YOU SPITFIRE YOUBITCH FUCK YOU!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::twilightangry2::rainbowhuh:

7640064 well i was quite close:scootangel:

7641180 ummm..... why you seen hesitant with the reply?:rainbowhuh:

7641631 im starting to think that you might murder somepony... or at least spitfire

7642099 i can totally see your point. The grammar is just crap due to my incompetence and i too think that soarin is quite loyal to the wonderbolts. After all he was ready to kick dash out of it. But when it comes to spitfire i gotta say she seems bit evil to me... i know its part of her drill sergent gimmick but still. I guess is just a point of view thing.

Anuways i love your honest feed back and constructive critisism:twilightsmile:

7642073 Don't worry I won't







YET!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:





But......If I keep on reading stories that potraies her as a B**ch(sorry for my language:twilightsheepish:)Yeah she might be my lest fave. W.B.:twilightblush:



nahh...I like her but...... not if with Soarin seeing,her with him makes my blood boil....





I SHIP SOARIN WITH DASHIE!!!!!!!!!!:scootangel::rainbowkiss: they are just sooooo perfect for each other ekkkkkk!!!!!!!!!:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy:
got carried away a bit there:twilightblush:

7642099 Same here. Spitfire & Soarin are both faster than dash in my headcannon.

OMG...:fluttershysad: But that SoarinDash joke at the ending doe!:rainbowlaugh:

Well, I doubt that Rainbow Dash is going to be less fixated on winning than Spitfire Soarin. :rainbowdetermined2:

7642157
She is too... cold, she can be so amoral.
And yes, is canon, in the official comic Soarin was so affected for Spitfire's actions in Rainbow Falls.

7642924
Hahaha! You're lucky, I fear her.

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