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LoneUnicornWriter


Just a person that reads, writes, and reviews stuff. Oh, and draws.

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While at Rainbow Dash's house, Fluttershy sits around waiting for her and Rainbow to go to Cloudsdale. Rainbow Dash was initially thinking of what could a been the start to a good day only to have met quite a surprise.

A/N: A little story I wrote up yesterday. Turned out a lot shorter than I had expected.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 19 )

Short, but very cute, I'm always up for some FlutterDash cuteness.

7631098 Thank you so much for commenting. It is much appreciated.^^

So they had a relationship all along, Fluttershy was just hesitant about using the "L" word with Rainbow Dash.

Man great story ive always liked the flutterdash idea but i dont wanna sond rude but you kind of rushed things but apart from that great story

That was cute. Though, I did catch a lot of grammatical errors.

7631467 Oh? Can I get the mistakes you have seen in PM? I would definitely like to know how much grammar mistakes I've made.

7631472 Sure, I'll do it when I get to school today.

Hello there, LoneUnicornWriter. Remember me? :)

What a lovely little story. Short, yes, but cute. Not bad at all. I shall have to keep an eye on what else you have to offer.

7631737 Thanks for reading. Although, not what I'm used to writing, it's stills good thing I got this one out.^^

7631841 I thought it was okay. Certainly not the best I've ever seen, but believe it it's NOWHERE near the worst. Not even in my top 100 worst - all of those are clopfics, which this is not. XD

I liked this. It was nice. Who says men can't like cute stuff and still have their manhood attached? XD Bravo, madam. Not bad for 1,010 words.

...but wait, he isn't dead, Shy Surprise!

7632922 There's a gun to your head and death in her eyes!

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Just a tad bit rushed love.:fluttershysad:

Who knows, maybe this is why Discord didn't show up. :raritywink:

good story. could i do a fanfic reading of this on my youtube channel?

keep writing and keep improving. :twilightsmile:

Sad Fluttershy makes me feel sad... Good character emotion one shot development!!!!

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