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Two ponies named Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle have feelings for each others for quite a time now but are scared to confess them to each others. Author and pink pony helped in it of course.


This is my first story here so I'm open fore some criticism in the comments. Also my English isn't the best so watch out for bad grammar. I'm sorry if this story isn't appealing for you in any way. My bad then :fluttercry:

Warning! 4th wall-breaking involved! You have been warned!


Cover art by BJLouisiana2014 from Deviant Art

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This is my first story here so I'm open for some criticism in the comments. Also my English isn't the best so watch out for bad grammar. I'm sorry if this story isn't appealing for you in any way. My bad then. :fluttercry:

Props for not saying 'first story so no hate pls'.

Your're on your way kiddo.

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Well better to know what you're doing wrong than just think that you're the best. Right? I hope so :ajsmug:

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I'm happy to hear that you liked it! I hope I will have time to write something more because ... let's be honest here, I don't have time. I was writing this story 2 weeks :twilightblush: But anyway thanks for reading and commenting.
Please, take this mustache for my respect :moustache:

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